poetandknowit
replying on I Can Write A Wrong, But I Can't Right A Poem by horus8
17 Dec 2002, 9:52 AM
Yes, tough guy, we have established your friends are plagiarists. You should be proud. And I don't give a fuck how the family treats you. Do not be such an easy target. And is not Boston Chicken respectable employment. Although the grease probably gives her pimples on her ass and face. But all that make up (how else do you get by in Hollywood) takes care of it. How to you survive out there. It must be tough. That rent payment. I bet you really need that job. Don't you worry about raising a son in such a din of culture? Maybe you should move to Orange Country. I hear it is a good movie. Take care. and be strong. the wolves are always out and hunting.
poetandknowit
replying on I Can Write A Wrong, But I Can't Right A Poem by horus8
17 Dec 2002, 9:46 AM
It is funny for someone whose whole life is made up how utterly oversensitive you are. Good luck on the soap opera. It is real career boost. I am glad you finished high school, but really it does not show, tough guy. And considering I do not own a car (I ride my bike everywhere because I am not rich like you and like to save my money for travel) and do not live in a metropolis (nor a house with a rent of 4 car payments - do you not think renting a waste) of sprawl where I am tied to a car, I think it is funny: the oil slave bit. See ya soon, lover. Daddy's coming home.
I dig praise.I think i know who you're talking about...
sound more like a frekin dried up patch brocoleye and camenbert soup than a birthmark to me.
no, i have seen him, and i tell you he is shaped like cape cod. as for his color, it's more of a moss-green. and furry/spongy/peaty is his texture. except for his ears, which are inexplicably sticky.
:rofl: thank you. it's funny, I just made the couplet, then filled in the dots to see where lines were supposed to be, to try and understand the poem form, and... well... :)
my dearest birthmark is not from bradistan i tell you he is livid red and shaped like lichtenstein.
damn. damn, damn damn. have a 10, for being so damn zen.
yeee-haw!
If I cant write a better poem than this, I will be surprised. Im glad I saw this poem cause it will give me confidence to write poems here.
"Audrey Hepburn with a Viking gene"--hee! Great fun and a technically (and otherwise) well-executed sonnet!
No problem
I think we just completed the replies at the same time. It happens.
Thank you very much ^_^
No problemo, amigo
That's got to hurt
Good stuff!
Sorry for my question coming after you've already answered it. I posted it before you typed the response, but either poemranker's gone arse up or someone has been screwing around with it. Anyhoo, it's still a great poem.
you don't like?
<{Baba^Yaga}>
replying on I Can Write A Wrong, But I Can't Right A Poem by horus8
17 Dec 2002, 3:50 AM
i have three user names, and only three..i have friends though, but less than five that use the sight..the pen is all powerful, when it can be picked up and held right, ah see,everyone just leaves me be..my son treats me like a jungle gym..i am an inanimate object..l.a. huh..well feel free to stop by i'm always here. waiting. environmental aye..that's gotta be rewarding, and it sure beats the hell out of boston chicken right. i don't pugile anymore it gives me yawning fits.