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-=SeTTle=- on Hunt by cobalt 16 Dec 2002, 9:31 AM

BOLSAU

-=SeTTle=- on Saviour by Mutant_X 16 Dec 2002, 9:30 AM

DUH NUH NUH NUH NUH NUH NUH NUHHHNHA NA???

blkarak on HGH 1000 (human growth hormone) fountain of youth? by Bachus 16 Dec 2002, 9:29 AM

Very funny. I love 'smart-ass humor.' -8

blkarak on Pages by Quarton 16 Dec 2002, 9:19 AM

Don't believe it; there's always time to go beyond the past failures and neglect. One can become the 'Chief' again; I know I'm headed there myself, I can feel it in my angry tears, in my sighs of past frustration. The clouds show teeth, razors of new horizons, bold interpretations of what's to come, what will be, by my hand, through angry resolve-9

Caducus on Despair by dave78981 16 Dec 2002, 9:08 AM

WTC, you say more in 3 lines than i read in 20, good to see a piece of work drowned in dark truth, 1st line sets the scene 3rd/4th rips it to pieces, haikus are not easy too

little_angel_maria replying on Reasons by little_angel_maria 16 Dec 2002, 8:48 AM

thank u amalea and thank u for al the advice u have given me i know u are right and tht one day i will laugh at myself thank u

Caducus on LIFE by jonny2000 16 Dec 2002, 6:50 AM

NOT A BAD STAB

INTRANSIT replying on A holiday warning by INTRANSIT 16 Dec 2002, 6:13 AM

Thanks for the comments people. I'ts just about not paying attention to what you are doing. thats all. I'm really sorry everyone spent their time on this. It's a throw-away. geez Y'all know I can do better. 10-4?

Caducus on Are You? by NewbieMe 16 Dec 2002, 6:07 AM

Not entirely memorable or original, try and explain the concept of suicide in a less trivial manner. You have to be, or had to be genuinely suicidal to write about suicide and hit people in a way they will think on what you have said. Dont be disheartened through malice in peoples criticism, answer them through your work and silent tongues will deafen you from what you created. Just gather inspiration, never force an emotion let it force you to write.

Caducus on Her Name was Lisa by Owner of the Sky 16 Dec 2002, 5:31 AM

This is poignant, It reminded me of me, once upon a time ago, this kind of experience is hard to write about with the style, substance and unpretentious way in which you sold it -my fave read today a golden egg has hatched you a 10

Caducus on The City (Sodom) by blkarak 16 Dec 2002, 5:26 AM

Wow, this rox

Caducus on Mother by blkarak 16 Dec 2002, 5:25 AM

Ouch ! -7-

Caducus on fa11ing by Bill Z Bub 16 Dec 2002, 5:06 AM

I like this a lot

Caducus on Only you by Sugarbbybuttrfly 16 Dec 2002, 5:03 AM

Now, this is more simplistic and engaging than the others, it flows nicely and is undemanding in a good way, take a 7 sugar

Caducus on Damien by Sugarbbybuttrfly 16 Dec 2002, 5:01 AM

Not adult enough for me in its depiction of infatuation, you need to show more dimension to your work as this stands it makes the character look pitiful, and desperate. You write the way you want too though I'm a miserable shit. (not voted)

Caducus on Myself by Sugarbbybuttrfly 16 Dec 2002, 4:57 AM

Needs more i think

Caducus on Am I Still Here? by Ranger 16 Dec 2002, 4:56 AM

This is a seminal work from you, And i my friend have something secret I have learned from this -congrats. ( I think the last 3 lines deserve more impact) I will think of it, scrambled thoughts at the moment =9= PS i might write something happy

Ranger on My Friend? by Blade 16 Dec 2002, 4:48 AM

Oh, and 'gonareha' is an STD-not something you'd want to get everyday (although if you got it everyday, you'd have to be damn busy!)

Ranger on My Friend? by Blade 16 Dec 2002, 4:46 AM

HAA HAA HAA! Ah, mirth.

Ranger on A Part Of Me Dies by Caducus 16 Dec 2002, 4:43 AM

I really like your style, but could you write something a bit more, well, happy?