god'swife
replying on alienheart by Bill Z Bub
12 Dec 2002, 12:02 AM
Oh yeah, television references, they're useless, that's my point. I went to a party about 5 years ago and everybody was taking t.v and movies. I said to someone, "whatever happened to the literary reference". They said "she left for better climes".
You made your lover leave at the witching hour? You are a secure woman. I am proud of you.
But what does that have to do with me not understanding the references in this poem? Are you drunk with love? Or just drunk? Is it pure? Can I touch your area 51?
poetandknowit
replying on Transformers "a higher, vaster, deeper meaning". by Bachus
11 Dec 2002, 11:59 PM
Why hold your breath. Just give in. Don't fear the reaper. I have no idea what you mean by the second comment. Did they spike the refreshments at the boy's sing-a-ling?
yes I'm drunk. No my lover just left. What was the next question?
god'swife
replying on Transformers "a higher, vaster, deeper meaning". by Bachus
11 Dec 2002, 11:51 PM
I can hold my breath for 2 minutes. I can make an 80 last an hour and a half at 2atms.
But what does that have to do with me not understanding the references in this poem? Are you drunk? Is your lover there tonight?
Of course you do, that's my point . Who needs to see it on television?
poetandknowit
replying on Transformers "a higher, vaster, deeper meaning". by Bachus
11 Dec 2002, 11:45 PM
I live 5280 feet above sea level. I do not have to worry about living underwater at this point.
god'swife
replying on Transformers "a higher, vaster, deeper meaning". by Bachus
11 Dec 2002, 11:43 PM
but when were living half underwater, I'll use up less air than you.
What are you talking about. Of course I know what kindness is.
do you know what kindness is? It was an episode once, on Andy Griffith. The new boy rolled into town, a jew poor thing, and nobody understood Hanukkah. Except of course Opie, he invited him to dinner. His Aunt made bitter greens and Barney brought fresh rolls from the neighborhood bakery. Everybody had a good laugh.
But I want to touch your area 51. Come on, please.
This poem is terrible. Get rid of the references. Are young men so really hard-up they'll fuck a-sexual green mini-beings?
Argh!
this is the best limerick on poem ranker...as far as the musical/spiritual vibe goes.
i changed the innard workings and the title of the poem to be more universal instead of all about my scrocking stuffels.g
Is it fiction? It has a stupid title? Have you read Jonathan Ames?
it is a disappointing book. it starts out well, but in the end, loses itself in itself. it is too much genius for its own good. but it is a fast read.
who isn't? please!