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poetandknowit on scotty dog by rosiebailey 11 Dec 2002, 10:10 AM

Ha, another in the london boy gansta clan. Oh yeah, we like to fight and drink and piss in alleyways and listen to The Streets (who is actually pretty good).

~incarnate~ replying on For the boyfriend I don't have by ~incarnate~ 11 Dec 2002, 10:09 AM

thanks! And oh, yeah, I will need the luck!

Caducus on Me and Mrs. Jones by bondjedi 11 Dec 2002, 10:06 AM

shit its back on boys pass the plastic lightsabre.

Caducus on just plain orange by New Life Drug 11 Dec 2002, 10:03 AM

J-a-c-k-p-o-t ! *8

poetandknowit on Free by muffin 11 Dec 2002, 10:02 AM

Good god this is bad. "Emotion dripped off her body"? Come on. that is the worst line ever.

Caducus on When Im Gone by New Life Drug 11 Dec 2002, 10:01 AM

the last line almost ruined it for me, i hate flow interuption ! Okay then had my moan ! this could be REALLY good, you put a good slant on the philosophy of death and this simmers with empathy, its a real thought provoker so you've touched on a good subject, however carry on working on it, get rid of the numbering as it sucks, I wanna read this again when you finished it. And geez you gotta finish this, resubmit the baby for more feedback, zzinnia, gods wife, poeat and knowit, horus8, tintag intransit, and many more may occasionally criticise but they are crystal muses of help.

poetandknowit on Popaul by Nicholas Jones 11 Dec 2002, 9:48 AM

Stupid as usual. You used to write well.

poetandknowit on alienheart by Bill Z Bub 11 Dec 2002, 9:46 AM

what is a pinwheel eye? And I have no idea what "i want to touch your area 51 you can be my agent Scully" but I like it. Pretty good stuff; just needs a bit of tightening.

Caducus on Europeans shouldn't mess with Ronald McDonald because one day he will rule their pathetic "continent" by bondjedi 11 Dec 2002, 9:44 AM

deep fried chickenhead mcnuggets and slow worms in fish, Macdonalds and snails are the least disgusting, lets have some more happymeal haikus

~incarnate~ on Gilded Stumps of Olde (AN STORY THAT IS NOT AN POEME) by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 11 Dec 2002, 9:44 AM

This is the shitiest, nastiest, most barbaric shit I've ever been unfortunate to lay my eyes on. You either need to get a girlfriend or a boyfriend, you're watching too much porn!!! your brain IS quite fuddled and this is the greatest level of obscene madness I've ever seen. I love it...NOT!

Caducus on The rendition 2 (at the wedding) by ~incarnate~ 11 Dec 2002, 9:38 AM

lord of the ringpiece, frodo is the fudgepacker of dwarves - watch out smurfs

Caducus on For the boyfriend I don't have by ~incarnate~ 11 Dec 2002, 9:37 AM

Beautiful, something nice to go home on, i wrote one like this once called 'When I meet my love' there is something very romantic and mystical in pre conception of a paragon like a soul mate, good luck in your search hope you got the patience you'll need it. *8*

<~> on alienheart by Bill Z Bub 11 Dec 2002, 8:21 AM

the split and twisted cliches, the tweaked grammar and spellings, the lilty-playfulness of it all... marvel, admire, praise...i am.

<~> replying on Untitled by ==Doylum 11 Dec 2002, 8:19 AM

silly wabbit. you can't hum a lefty cockfer. you gargle them, before they're gone.

<~> on alienheart by Bill Z Bub 11 Dec 2002, 8:10 AM

well, well, well done!

<~> replying on Haiku by INTRANSIT 11 Dec 2002, 8:01 AM

maybe this is too much to be questioned in a haiku. maybe not. maybe yes.

<~> replying on Haiku by INTRANSIT 11 Dec 2002, 8:00 AM

i'm not sure that comes through. maybe you should pose it as a question: do fish clocks have hands? not that that conveys the meaning any more clearly...but it amuses me.

INTRANSIT replying on Haiku by INTRANSIT 11 Dec 2002, 7:29 AM

I was thinking about if fish tell time the way humans can by starlight or sunlight.

<~> on The Cat by blkarak 11 Dec 2002, 7:26 AM

sweet. hope he made it.

<~> on Check Yourself by INTRANSIT 11 Dec 2002, 7:16 AM

still good.