Bachus
on Haiku by INTRANSIT
10 Dec 2002, 8:07 PM
i caught an eighteen lb striper last spring..i thought it was a shark. no shit.
excellent
I think the good tidings of the season have boggled your thinking. And the fact that you consider a soap opera gig legitimate artistic work, but journalism and other forms of decent writing a cover up for all the Hollywood boys who rant and rave barfed up Cassady is truly (well) frightening. Are you short like GW. she would have to stand on a chair to kiss me.
poetandknowit
replying on Dear Mr. Poetry, could you hold my purse? <how does babbit do it> by horus8
10 Dec 2002, 7:13 PM
It is perfectly respectable to work at Taco Bell.
like fishing in the bering strait for eel.
nice for a story. I like "Damn"'s rang out and "What Happened," shocked us both. Those phrases as subjects did well.
there's nothing wrong with this poem. i assume the pros are being critical since most have forgotten why they even began to write poetry. it must have been to keep one's nose from dipping into one's beer.
precisely. sort of like being have in the bag, but knowing exactly what you want and were you are going in the moment.
don't be afraid to suck the laST sentence into the last stanza it fits fine. no osterization needed..
i have to agree wth d.a and gw (we were giggling about it while she was at my house just now) on this one, both of your attempts at spanish are umm well, whatever. better luck next time. have an eight for christmas.e
horus8
replying on Dear Mr. Poetry, could you hold my purse? <how does babbit do it> by horus8
10 Dec 2002, 6:03 PM
just because my sister comes over and uses my computer does not mean i'm menstruating. i hope you know we're not the same people.
my audition went well today. i might just be a dr. yet. ha! ha!
On second thought, make mine nine. This one still does it for me.
Does that mean you and P&K are one in the same? I'm really lost , I guess.