Has nobody noticed the poetic devices such as short, incomplete sentences?

She doesn't like being milked by strangers. I think you have to have to seen the film to understand this, otherwise you'll just think I'm weird. Have you ever watched 'The Rebel', starring Tony Hancock? It's superb.

Maybe I want to overwhelm the reader. Sounds like fun to me.

I think the lack of emotion you feel is due to the constraint of the sonnet form; I'm not sure if I really mastered it in this one. I realise it describes a state of mind rather than evoking it.

sooz, horus8 and runkpock, how many more are there?

who is annie??

really? fascinating..i love their stuff..dave grohls a total wizard. just a real ass in person, but damn can he beat those skins.( i sat next to him and had a drink at st. andrews hall in detroit when he was in nirvana) by the way i popped in inscesticide yesterday by nirvana...that album cranks strait through...so where can i down load it from (the queens new song) is that the one song (the one you mentioned) that had one mom from like the midwest all in a tissy?i

horus, that's an actual song by the queens of the stone age. It's a brilliant track entitled "Feel Good Hit of the Summer". I suggest you download it. It's very catchy. I listened to it at least 20 times today.

i find it strange that you went only to my odes, but there's one thing..you also went to recalculations (without commenting). how did you know that was an ode if it wasn't in the title, but it used to be over a month ago. cheeky bastard. you are trickster indeed.s