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MakenzieNy replying on The cowards way out by MakenzieNy 5 Dec 2002, 10:01 PM
thanx for your advice,i'm still working on that one
Bachus on HATTIE by Nicholas Monson 5 Dec 2002, 9:51 PM
what a tart. ha! that's funny.8. sink? could you?d
Bachus on TRIBUTE TO A FRIEND by Nicholas Monson 5 Dec 2002, 9:49 PM
better. i like imps...they can be excessive indeed.??
god'swife on Our Love Was Meant to Be by MakenzieNy 5 Dec 2002, 9:43 PM
Don't tell, show. Pictures dear, that's the key, not feelings exposed but snapshots.
god'swife on The cowards way out by MakenzieNy 5 Dec 2002, 9:41 PM
Fuck, I am not sure it's that cowardly at all. My nephew killed himself, same as your fellow here, drugs and all. Jesus, you know, it really takes some balls. Besides that, your poem starts off very well and then kind of tapers off like a guttering wick. I would try and revise if I were you, though plainly I am not. I think if you tried replacing 'cowards way out' with something felt instead of believed you come to place so close it would hurt. Good luck.
horus8 on Deep Inner Pain by razorgrin 5 Dec 2002, 9:03 PM
tomorrows headline.."man hijacks plane with saran wrap"!? he could use it as rope and a weapon..tie them up, then let them pick either smothering or bleeding to death..weird wild stuff. sorry about your arm and your cookies. 8.o
Quarton on Glassblowers by Christof 5 Dec 2002, 6:24 PM
Really liked this one. Short and meaningful with great rhythm. One typo, "gawp" should be "gawk."
horus8 replying on Spider by Blade 5 Dec 2002, 6:11 PM
As usuall you forgot the only two that work. speed and heroin. What exactly do drugs have to do with this? Apparently, everything.
ciantu on Jockey by betty swallox 5 Dec 2002, 2:43 PM
twas stupid
ciantu on A load of bollocks - literally!!! by Yardbird 5 Dec 2002, 2:41 PM
hahahahaha!!!!!!
ciantu on Contempt by Britpop 5 Dec 2002, 2:40 PM
i should hope not
ciantu on The Considerate Lover by Tascobar 5 Dec 2002, 2:37 PM
eiw cool
ciantu on Rich and the wall by INTRANSIT 5 Dec 2002, 2:36 PM
why?
ciantu on Inside by Jagang 5 Dec 2002, 2:34 PM
nice
ciantu on Haiku by heart 5 Dec 2002, 2:34 PM
ok
ciantu on Fruit Punch by teacup 5 Dec 2002, 2:31 PM
twas sorta retarded
ciantu on Essential Love by some deleted user 5 Dec 2002, 2:30 PM
pretty
ciantu on I have no Idea?...? by brazen 5 Dec 2002, 2:28 PM
what are you on? i want some
ciantu on I have no Idea?...? by brazen 5 Dec 2002, 2:28 PM
what are you on? i want some
-=SeTTle=- on Spider by Blade 5 Dec 2002, 2:26 PM
VERSE: NICOTENE VALIUM VICODEN MARAJUANA ECSTACY AND ALCOHOL. CHORUS: C-C-C-C-C-COCAINE.