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INTRANSIT replying on Charlie by INTRANSIT 26 Nov 2002, 7:33 PM
Well duh. I could've done that considering the title is a proper name. Um, swing what? I'm hung like a stud hamster!
INTRANSIT replying on Charlie by INTRANSIT 26 Nov 2002, 7:30 PM
A god's wife? She pulled her stuff around the same time I did. That was wierd. I prefer to stay as close to the proper form and topic as I can. I'm all for anything poignant or humorous though.
<~> replying on Charlie by INTRANSIT 26 Nov 2002, 7:29 PM
no. just dinner tonight. i'll save getting naked for when there are at least 20 of us there, thank you very much.
poetandknowit replying on Charlie by INTRANSIT 26 Nov 2002, 7:28 PM
I thought your were at the barn getting naked with your hippie friends and chanting B.F. Skinner tonight.
INTRANSIT on ode to horus by daniella 26 Nov 2002, 7:25 PM
Both of these made me laugh. Thanks.
poetandknowit replying on Charlie by INTRANSIT 26 Nov 2002, 7:24 PM
Actually, I quite enjoy the haiku if used properly. I think it allows you: 1) to reduce emotion, sometimes difficult emotion, into simple images and 2) create pure imagery. However, folks seem to be tied up on English variations of it and forget the images for say, a comedic purpose. That bothers me. Ypu did not do that here, so don't pull a God's Wife on me.
<~> on Charlie by INTRANSIT 26 Nov 2002, 7:22 PM
since you have given him a name, i'd like to see anthropomorphism in the poem. i.e., call him 'him,' not it. swing it just a little more, too.
INTRANSIT replying on Check Yourself by INTRANSIT 26 Nov 2002, 7:21 PM
nice catch, thanks. Does the rest of the beat work?
poetandknowit on rain by skinda 26 Nov 2002, 7:18 PM
Shout out to the peeps in Fresno!!!!
poetandknowit on rain by skinda 26 Nov 2002, 7:18 PM
Shout out to the peeps in Fresno!!!!
INTRANSIT replying on Charlie by INTRANSIT 26 Nov 2002, 7:18 PM
I will, eventually. Thank you, and you're not a big fan of the haiku are you?
poetandknowit on Pleas Dont.. by MysticalRaven88 26 Nov 2002, 7:17 PM
Well, Melinda, you are 14. Puberty has got you down, and let me tell you, it does not get any better from here on out. Pure acne.
<~> on Check Yourself by INTRANSIT 26 Nov 2002, 7:15 PM
woo hoo! look who's back in the house!!! go, boy! okay, now the poem: the punctuation in the second stanza confuses me. do you need the comma after shoulder? like the thought.
poetandknowit replying on Charlie by INTRANSIT 26 Nov 2002, 7:13 PM
Get over it. Cute at best.
poetandknowit on "My Love" by wickedemon4 26 Nov 2002, 7:10 PM
Pimple poem deluxe. It is true. In one week the site has gone to complete hell. Cannot you people just go to the journal sites and spew your nonsense. Are you British?
poetandknowit on Maliced flame by T'ien 26 Nov 2002, 7:08 PM
And you are sending this off to Slayer tomorrow morning. What crap. The British are coming, the British are cuming. I h8 ur shit cuz it is jus realeee bad.
poetandknowit on Some place west of here, or the big blah blah. both apply by horus8 26 Nov 2002, 7:05 PM
Would that not be the ocean Hollywood beat man.
poetandknowit on Make Me A pie by un4208 26 Nov 2002, 7:03 PM
I realse the Brits have the Shakespearean chip on the shoulder, but has you humor really sunk to the depths of this crap. It would not even be funny in Texas and they laugh at everything. Go beat off to your pictures of the Queen and save us the misery of reading your shit.
INTRANSIT replying on Charlie by INTRANSIT 26 Nov 2002, 7:02 PM
Insecurity, mostly. Trying to balance work,poetry and time with my wife is frustrating. I'd rather verse and learn more than anything right now. Would you comment on my haiku, please.
poetandknowit on Boxers Over Y-Fronts by un4208 26 Nov 2002, 7:01 PM
And your point; besides being a new nitwit. Go find a nice closet to hide in.