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T'ien on My love for another. by cleverdevice 26 Nov 2002, 7:35 AM

very nice young timothy

hobojo on Another Chance by Bonehiss 26 Nov 2002, 7:35 AM

This poem sounds like words of a cheating man - too eloquent - to easily muttered, too slick.

T'ien replying on Maliced flame by T'ien 26 Nov 2002, 7:19 AM

hhmm lol from the critics i must reason that this is not my best work :) ah well i like it and it occupied me for half an hour

Tascobar on Maria's ways on how to deal with puberty! by little_angel_maria 26 Nov 2002, 6:40 AM

Yet another atrocious posting - however this time you get a 1, as it is marginally better than your usual litter.

hobojo on Johannesburg 2002 by Blue Magpie 26 Nov 2002, 6:32 AM

This ecco's my sentiments - we should not be surprised when we are attacked by those we flourish off of. This is written quite well - S4L4 - how bought "that arizes when people live with disease; and polluted airs cause some to gasp and to weeze.

Ranger on Ambiguous Love Poem For A Girl I Once Knew by poetandknowit 26 Nov 2002, 6:31 AM

I have a really nasty feeling that this poem could well apply to me in thirty years' time. It's incredibly beautiful, but not what I need at this time.

-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. on First date (for Larry, a lesbian vampire) by Bachus 26 Nov 2002, 6:19 AM

Have you read 'Koko' by Peter Straub?

Ranger on First date (for Larry, a lesbian vampire) by Bachus 26 Nov 2002, 6:18 AM

Interesting...

Ranger on The Sands Of Galway by Caducus 26 Nov 2002, 6:17 AM

Not bad at all-original too, in a way.

Caducus on The Abyss of myself by ciantu 26 Nov 2002, 5:57 AM

I've been saying this shit for years. Every now and then i read something on this site and it restores my faith in the human condition, you sir are ahead of your time with this poem, stanza 2 is right their kicking like a mule. *9*

Caducus on What's the Point of Love? by loneshadow29 26 Nov 2002, 5:46 AM

The point of love is the 'falling' as it grounds you. Love is A heroic loser seeded within the pounding pastures of our crimson core. (at least you got me inspired)

Caducus on Another Chance by Bonehiss 26 Nov 2002, 5:40 AM

I always find it difficult to rate your work as your obviously a hopeless romantic, who writes unchallenging, simple writings. I'm giving you a 6 on this because their is a purity to your work. However I have to criticize you on one aspect and that is the lack of originality in your work, it is a very basic 'greeting card' style with little fibre and alluring qualities. Fair play to you though, none of us here are Hemingway at the moment, just lose yourself more in your imagination and you'll find more satisfaction in your creativity.

Caducus on Maria's ways on how to deal with puberty! by little_angel_maria 26 Nov 2002, 5:20 AM

Buy A Remington

-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. replying on Maliced flame by T'ien 26 Nov 2002, 4:49 AM

TELL US THE TRUTH OR POETIE WILL BE CONTACTING THE FBI.

Caducus on Maliced flame by T'ien 26 Nov 2002, 4:31 AM

Not a bad 'ad break' read *6*

-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. on Perversions by razorgrin 26 Nov 2002, 4:15 AM

For some reason I didn't see this up until now. You win the prize. Vore and fisting are two of the greatest sexual deviances of all time, although Roman Showers are a bit sick. HA HA HA

Caducus on Cocky by Goose 26 Nov 2002, 3:55 AM

West Side !

Caducus on Liar by Goose 26 Nov 2002, 3:54 AM

This would be better as a Haiku, as it stands its still good but I would be interested to see how much more you could say with less. Hope I haven't cooked your goose, Mr Goose -7-

Caducus on Johannesburg 2002 by Blue Magpie 26 Nov 2002, 3:52 AM

So they pissed you off huh? This IS a confounding and impressive piece, well done -8-

Caducus on "My Love" by wickedemon4 26 Nov 2002, 3:48 AM

I wrote something like this once for my girlfriend. She finished with me and looking back who could blame her?