<{Baba^Yaga}>
on Everyone loves me- not. by UAFANTHORPEY
21 Nov 2002, 1:57 PM
what's the wwe?
she's a taurus, they can only go ignored for a short period of time before they wipe the board...honestly though i don't know why she did that? as far as loss goes it all still was saved in our personal comment areas..right? so. anyway, i'm fond of dark angel i wouldn't want to ah mock our beautifull relationship in any sense...i don't think it was his fault though, she's just like that...always has been too...always either night or day...know what i mean?.
Hey, superman, why did GW take her poems and run away? Is it DA's fault? Should will kill him. This is a serious loss for all of us up and coming poets at poemranker, eh.
You win.
you first. you know how i feel about you, but i'm going to be a big boy for a minute a rate this with no bye-ass 0. lol! naw just kidding here's an eight...because the titles cool and it's all around well done like my eggs benidect and fresh squeezed orange juice..you know it's 85 degrees right now in sunny california..slice of papaya? anyone? 8. mayne add a question mark with an exlamation POINT! for overall stamina down the stretch aye.r
Also, a) it's not a slash, it's a more of a gouge, and b) almost nobody has the willpower to gouge their arm deeply enough to cause enough bleeding. So stop writing fucking shit suicide poetry until you actually know how to do it.
If nothing matters, then it doesn't matter that nothing matters, so why worry about it? I think the REAL question you should be asking yourself is "Does a stone wall stop a blind woman as surely as one who sees?"
razorgrin
replying on St. Germain & The Charismatically Uncomitted by <{Baba^Yaga}>
21 Nov 2002, 11:14 AM
Snuggy-butt, though I am many things, I am not angry. All of my anger is focused on another target, so all everything else gets is my mirth and youthful glee. Limonade says hi, and she misses you.
this is very good
Can't believe this has had shit votes, the voting on here is dody at times to say the least, well kiki your not talking bollocks, this is a deep river and i enjoyed the swim. faaaaaaacking 5 ?
have an 8
OH PLEASE COMMENT POSITIVELY ON 'AIDS IN A VAN'.
IT WOULD MEAN SO MUCH TO ME.
"Standing there I grew baggage on my cells/
like polyps on a heavy breath."
What the fuck does that mean?
This is the best thing you have ever written.
Hulk Hogan
The Ultimate Warrior
"Macho Man" Randy Savage
Bret "The Hitman" Hart
"Hacksaw" Jim Duggan
The Undertaker
Quite good.
With this poem, Bachus has hit on a primal cultural archetype. "The Smurfs" was a creepy show. Their skin has a blue pallor, like corpses, or pagan celtic body paint. And the show has strong anti-semitic overtones. Gargamel, their enemy, looks like a nazi cartoon-jew. And he wants to capture the smurfs to make gold. And that cat, Azriel...Israel? hmm? And Gargamel makes the first smurfette, the one with black hair. Lilith? Gnosticism anyone? Hello!
My pathetic attempts to subdue you? Bahahahahaha. Honestly, Yardbird, it's almost like you've never had an argument before. You have no style.
Goodness. You certainly do carry a grudge. I think you can be my new Poetie.
Brilliant, you have dissected the sinister angst and grief that lies in the true thoughts of the smurfs with panache and a brutal simplicity. All we need now is one for the plight of smurfette.