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god'swife replying on the pot collected water when it hid us from the rain by kiki 13 Nov 2002, 10:13 PM

Are you trying to say my opinion is somehow less valuable then your professor's? Are you sorry? REALLY? I doubt it.Well received by the likes of you I'm sure. I suggest you post poems based on your own enthusiasm and perhaps dealing with some actual human experience. Oh no, I forgot that is somehow forbidden. Yet you post something reeking of loss and pain and mis-understandiing. . I just don't like your arrogance and your unfriendly comments. You could be the next God Damn Big Deal and it wouldn't matter, because you're mean. I sure I'm not the first to tell you so.

w~* ATHENA *~w replying on licking my tongue by w~* ATHENA *~w 13 Nov 2002, 9:38 PM

I have a lot of them.. used to do nothing but write and wonder why I was so young.

kiki replying on the pot collected water when it hid us from the rain by kiki 13 Nov 2002, 9:35 PM

Well thank you for your opinion god'swife. I am sorry my poems do not speak to you in generic emotional language. However, I have made my selections for this website based on my professor's enthusiasm over these poems. And although he does not have thirty-four poems posted on poemranker, he has published a well received book. You are right; I am somewhat self-involved, though I don't know how you got that from our brief interaction. I, however, am not a creep; I can assure you.

w~* ATHENA *~w on No recalculations needed by Bachus 13 Nov 2002, 9:32 PM

very counting crows, adam would be proud.

horus8 on epicentre by richa 13 Nov 2002, 9:29 PM

Androgynous and underhanded as is consistently predictable i'm convinced you're just another genius doing this left handed for the high laugh...here's something else to laugh about...an 9. i

horus8 on Rebel Wind by KarmicTwiggy 13 Nov 2002, 9:17 PM

how many phonecalls does it take to make it to number 1 on this fricken site....no need to count...just watch. oh- rebel wind blow me away.....this get's the HORUS8 GOLDEN QUE-TIPS (MY FRIEND TIP'S THE BOAR) FOR OUTSTANDING ACHIEVMENT IN APPROPRIATE BELITTLEMENT AND LOVELISTNESS. enjoy the cantaloupe and the fricca-seed hornbeetle thorax.....just had it flown in..

horus8 on Prose poem written in 1 minute and 27 seconds while listening to Slim Cessna croon by poetandknowit 13 Nov 2002, 9:05 PM

how many times do you get dumped in a year...at least you have more control of the handle in this situation.....at least.8.

limonade on Prose poem written in 1 minute and 27 seconds while listening to Slim Cessna croon by poetandknowit 13 Nov 2002, 8:08 PM

You are a genius! How did you ever write this delicious piece of literature so quickly. At least you've still got your toilet, even if it won't flush.

<{Baba^Yaga}> replying on Colony by <{Baba^Yaga}> 13 Nov 2002, 6:13 PM

as long as i can sound it all out. i don't lose to much sleep over it. spelling that is. except for the squaw i mean..that one has got me a little peived.

feathers68 replying on Bedside Angel by feathers68 13 Nov 2002, 5:43 PM

NOPE no pee at all but lots of other stuff! Men can not pee cat pee! and by the way putting that you deserve any comment back! your right your brain is scrambled!

feathers68 replying on Bedside Angel by feathers68 13 Nov 2002, 5:41 PM

Don't think human's can make cat pee! how about something else!

feathers68 replying on Bedside Angel by feathers68 13 Nov 2002, 5:40 PM

Don't supose you could elaborate?

Yardbird replying on Ode to a Depleted Uranium Shell by Yardbird 13 Nov 2002, 5:12 PM

Wahey! :)

poetandknowit replying on The Real You by jonny2000 13 Nov 2002, 5:11 PM

Fucking' hours. Get your kid off the keybored.

Yardbird replying on Ode to a Depleted Uranium Shell by Yardbird 13 Nov 2002, 5:10 PM

Cheers! The simmer with mirth was just an idea to get across the heat of the bullet, as well as the enjoyment it might have if it were alive - I know it's a crude device, but it sounded like a good idea at the time!!!

Yardbird replying on Ode to a Depleted Uranium Shell by Yardbird 13 Nov 2002, 5:01 PM

Sure - it's in the pipeline as we speak...

god'swife on The Land of Back-to-Front by [mojo] 13 Nov 2002, 4:58 PM

Wonderful, I can't think of any flaws except minor typos. Very cheery. I like nonsense.

horus8 on The Real You by jonny2000 13 Nov 2002, 4:55 PM

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horus8 on No recalculations needed by Bachus 13 Nov 2002, 4:46 PM

it's because he wrote it when he was in his coyote face. lol! what a crock of shite...i mean overall it's fine and all..it rolls off of the tongue and is a bit predictable..it's quite old and has that fresh out of highschool "what do i do now" sort of immature smell. oh well. we all started somewhere, but i wont vote. just because that would be the most caddish move for me yet today..other than talking to myself. a

poetandknowit on Wheelin' N Rockin' by INTRANSIT 13 Nov 2002, 4:37 PM

Does this mean you are coming to Denver? Have you been listening to Def Leppard or Steppenwolf. Are you lookin' for adventure or whatever comes your way? 10-4?