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replying on Hedgehog's Dilemma by Shin-Bojangles
27 Oct 2002, 12:24 PM
In Amsterdam, they call it a "Royale w/ Fucknose"
jajaja im laughing
no not about my father and thank you poetandknowit
Well lets see, I only have 4 poems posted and hmmmm I have how many written, at least 50. So no, not all my poems sound the same, and for your information The three "love" poems are about the same guy so yes they are going to sound similar. You really need to learn how to give criticism constructively.
My user name is just that, a name, I use it because me and my best friend started with the nick names evil angel and perfect devil many years ago. There is no other meaning then that behind it. One last thing, this site is about the poetry not the name, so get a life, you take things way to seriously.
I don't know where you're from, Sir, unless it's Canada. But here in mighty England, having a penchant for Red Dwarf isn't considered a sign of 'culture', but rather of 'being a fucknose'.
Skeletor kicked he-man's ass
If you can fit Walt Whitman in your flat, you will have a bridge.
I like the rework, I can see the picture better now. Might've been me the first time. Anyway, this is beautiful and sad.good read.8
HAHAHA! Excellent.
i like the general concept of it and it flows rather well
a lot of thought into it, but it culd use a little structure work, but since its just basic free verse its ok
yeah but skellington poemes are good.
good content but could use more of a rythmic feel
Great!10
Thou dosth protest too much.
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on The wonderful happy relationship between two wonderful and caring people by Dark Angle
27 Oct 2002, 12:04 AM
THIS POEM FUCKING ROCKS!
I think I might have but I'm not sure