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on Fruit Punch by teacup
21 Oct 2002, 11:17 AM
don't vote for your own poems. thank you.
you judge. why? leave that to the cotton mathers of the world. if you are going to abandon yourself to it, do so. you're not shockong anyone, except maybe shin.
it's long since been faded my friend... but for now, I try to be strong for loved ones who need strength during this dark time :o)
they are quite clearly not the same. the first is in the singular, the second could be applied to millions as one saw fit
'Ethnic monorities' are the ame as 'ethnic moronities', sir.
Moses
proposes
that all those with hooked noses
be hencefore loved and liked
not to be confused with cut and kiked
as gods better half gets confused
over which one should be used
in any given situation
but it could clear up trouble in a disputed nation
and yet since even god is on the wane
and at the risk of sounding too profane
the moor men hear her with brows that glisten
the less they are inclined to listen
especially since they are regularly kiked
with a boot thats swished and spiked
OMG!!! ok whatever thanks by the way forst compliment i get from you
AND NO YOU CANT DISCRIMINATE AGAINST ASIANS OK WHAT HAVE ASIANS DONE TO YOU
These works of yours really would read much better as songs than as poems, somehow.
listen can i ask you one question what the fuck is your problem why must you be so fucking rude why are you always on my case what the fuck have i done to you nothing ok !!! so for gods sake leave me Alone
Can we discriminate against Asians? And don't forget that your dear friend blade will want to drink your blood. I fail to see how you will stop me from being rude, saying your poems are crap (this one actually seems a bit better than the others. Would almost make an amusing song, with some work), or killing America.
'Hang the messenger' is excellent. Nice twist on the normal phrase.
Let us freely admit it, Zzinnia's reply is far better than the poem itself.
thank you :)
Hee hee, silent voices... That's even funnier than my bird with lips.
OUCH, I THINK I MUST BE DEAF. THIS ISN'T A SONNET, BY THE WAY. A SONNET HAS FOURTEEN LINES AND RHYMES. SORRY TO DISSAPOINT YOU. HERAT HAS INDEED BEEN MISSING FOR A LONG TIME. 'TRON'? 'RESTTING'? 'REYS'? 'BEYS'? WHAT DO ALGERIAN RULERS HAVE TO DO WITH THIS?
do you hate her?
Truganine was an ethnic monority.
Since I do not know what 'ethnic monorities' are, I couldn't possibly comment. Good day to you, Sir.
faces? no. faeces? yes.