horus8
on The Devil Made Her Do It by Limness
17 Oct 2002, 3:42 AM
the chariot? then the star. some dogs bark at nothing..why'd you repost all of these?
My limited knowledge of tarot doesn't help me here, but I think she's decided to cool off her relationship with some chap? what is the significance if inverting the last card? Pleasedo explain because I think it'll clear up the poem for me - it has your usual grace and swing.
I don't know what it is - maybe it's the time of morning - but I think this is hilarious. You have a sly style and I like it. 'If ears retained'etc is genius.
Good
You wouldn't happen to have a constructive sentence to bless me with.
Maybe I'm just warmin' up.
Why thank you m'dear. I thought of drums but I figgered that to be to obvious, any other suggestions?
Maybe he did it so you'd stop whining. Apparently it failed. I wonder what he'll find next...
This vaguely reminds me of an opposite version of Ogden Nash's 'Adventures of Isabel' (if that's what it's called, can't quite recall). Maybe it's the bear.
And you definitely get a plus for talking 16th century-like. :D
You are melodramatic, rhyme extremely well and like shit(e). What am I to do with you? Please read my Bum's rhyme, it was for you.
Some thing works here. But it is a very large circle you're drawing with it.
No, ya got it wrong. This IS a place where you kiss and tell.
I dunno, this speaks to me of a prostitutes sadness towards her predicament...? Well written, I think.
Hee hee.
'Climb every mountain...' This is a sappy, sappy musical lyric. It has been said before. I'll take 'Sound of Music's version, myself. Even if I don'T really like that musical.
The tambourine just doesn't scan well because I associate tambourines with women, other than that, I like it.
Giveme one single, good, understandable and worthwhile argument for the addition of those ridiculous tildes and asterixes in the title. Just one.
heeb is what heeb does.my uncle herbie is gay in laguna. i'm what? index fingering the lamb chop.chop.chop. michael from florida just called. he's of probation and quite happy. i'm happy for him. he's kinda like my dad now. the patsy cline bios on tonight. yae!