Christof
on Breeze by Nicholas Jones
15 Oct 2002, 7:32 AM
very suggestive and neutral (in a good way)
Yes are good at sens eof palce, and tying it in with personal reminiscence to come up with something really resonant. Really strong.
Well thank you. That means a lot.
beautiful and spare.
Nice pun!
You're on to something, here, danll; perhaps just a few word tweaks. Reminds me of John Lennon's "Julia" and "It's just the Motion" by Richard and Linda Thompson.
You're on to something, here, danll; perhaps just a few word tweaks. Reminds me of John Lennon's "Julia" and "It's just the Motion" by Richard and Linda Thompson.
It is beautifully written ua but why is it a crow?
Well done Luke!
Your monkeys all of you, now rate mine a ten all of you bums. Short and sweet this poem. PS, rosie Bailey is God
Poetandknowit, why do you hoard your answers like they're bones? Please write. Real mail would be nice. You own my address, put a stamp on it.
Please do not disappear. I need you here. The way a mule needs a steady and knowing kick. Love the title
You right like a boy on drugs. Good for you, excellent even.
God good they will. And try on your things while you're still breathing. They surely will. Last line is confusing to me, but what isn't this day.
This is perhaps too personal for me to appreciate. I lose myself towards the middle and continue lost til the end.
perfect. 10
Stanza 2 is so perfect in it's vocalization. Lovely and sweet. Like hard candy rolled around in my mouth. I am a connoiseur of intelligent sorrow. Birds of a feather and all that. Thank you for the bittersweet treat.
Of all the poems I read here last week, this one left the strongest impression. Of poetry, I am not a worthy judge. But this "reads pretty", and spoke to me all week. Thank you for the thoughts to ponder.