little_angel_maria
replying on Daywalker by Blade
12 Oct 2002, 3:26 AM
shut the fuck up!! why the fuck do u have to be so fucking rude i dont give 2 fliyng fucks if u dont like my poetry anywayz i actually express what im feeling what the fuck did i do to you tingtagiles huh? nothing so what if he cant spell u dont have 2 say he sucks we aint all great not even your poetrys good but at least we give it a go but anywayz dont cuss cause im from england and i do know how to spell so hush your mouth aight u cock sucking fool IDIOT WHAT THE FUCK DID I DO TO YOU
Hi Katie,
i appreciate you taking the time to read and comment on my work. i have just posted a piece, 'Lupus in A Minor'. Take care.
WORDWULF
My dea girl, please. We're not all excellent writers, but a large number of us can spell. Which is apparently beyond your intellectual capability. And this particular poem is rather bad. If he eliminated the comma at the end of the second line, even that would increase its value greatly. Though it would still not make it very good. He has done no shit to us than force us to read an extremely bad poem -- the same way that you have done nothing to us but make us read bad poetry, save that you add the insult of atrociously bad spelling to it. Take a basic English course and then we can speak
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spiritual moccasins.... uh huh...
Deep.
NOT* many
How??? This may lead to you stealing my identity...muwahaha. I am 13..really.. i suppose there's many 13 year olds interested in posting their poetry or even writing for that matter... but..hey!
How old are you god'swife?
isn't that nice. spoiled brat. i bet you got what you deserved (in your 'vast' mind. i'm sure the best is yet to come. don't underestimate the overestimated. it will come back mutated and twice as sly. watch. nice poem though. 7. p.s no one really gives a shit about what school you went to, or abusive nuns...just ask jim carrol over a a little 'boy' in the alley. you could have a double doctorate in jelly bean counting and make your point just as well. just an observation. no disrespecst. oh by the way..your huge in my huge mind.
match tip the sawdust. my prediction? number nine in worst section within 2 months, at the latest. unvotable regurgitative pelican spew. you'd be better off just scanning the comic book page and posting that. atleast we'd having something in front of us worth reading.
wow your witty, but i feel internalization is a waste of time. how do i know you might ask? well i wrote this eleven years ago while in military prison, and the comment i wrote today before posting it. fortunately i think now that the piece is a pile of self pitying child's tripe...and that "preceding comment" happens to be proof of the fact that we all have to 'get over it' sometime. so... get over it fucker.
Liked the poem, but hated the comment preceding mine.
i can almost relate to that
thank you *hug*
thank you *hug*
thank you *hug*
god we aint all exellent writters you know why do u guys gotta take the mick out of blade man he hasnt done shit to u damnn....
HUSH YOUR MOUTH BABA YAGA I THINK THIS POEM IS ACTUALLY VERY GOOD SO F**** YOURSELF DANG.!!!
ANYWAYS GOOD POEM BLADE :)