INTRANSIT
on Limmerick, Starring Andy by MuDvAyNe
12 Oct 2002, 1:11 PM
Goofy n clean fun.
he's your father. and he control volcanoes w/ his mind. get clear. perhaps you should read more.
this is just sooo funny. It's like it actually happened (hoping it didn't) lol, but great work
Maybe they stare because they read the Bible, too?
"If a man also lie with mankind, as he lieth with a woman, both of them have committed an abomination: they shall surely be put to death; their blood shall be upon them." Lev 20:13
Actually, they stare at you because you're gay.
Lacking in power. It makes a damn good point, but any passing homophobes'll just read it, shrug their shoulders and go on much the same as before. Good effort though.
...Nope, I've scrutinised every word and I can't find any trace of a point whatsoever.
Oh dear lord. You must be a teenage goth - there's no other explanation.
i suppose we all need some sadness to be happy. after all how will we know we are happy if we are never sad. All bad times eventually pass away leaving us wiser than before.
I see. I express my opinion and I'm fucking rude, but somehow you're not? You have done nothing but post an godawful comment, misspelled, which I read and found disturbing bad. If your insults had any intelligence or invention to them, I might listen, but they are puerile, cliched spoutings. You do indeed express what you're feeling, but badly. I fail to see why your coming from England should mean I oughtn't to cuss. I'm perfectly willing to believe that you're able to spell and create a grammatically correct sentence, but you'll have to do better than this last post of yours to convince me. Much better. You are an overly sensitive little girl, though I confess a certain amusement at reading you. Especially when you scream at me not to be rude in far ruder language than I ever used on you. All in all, you could rearrange that little rant of yours into a most interesting surrealistic poem with a bit of tweaking. Give it a go, won't you? It couldn't be much worse than what you've done already
Superb!
Don't listen godswife. There's nothing wrong with dogs in trances.
Have you been reading T.S. Eliot?
Is it more cowardly to fly a plane into a building and die, or to drop bombs on an Afghan wedding from an enormous height where you are safe? And people said my poem 'Recent History' was naive!
I don't fit in either. Anywhere. You need to find your own little niche. Or you'll end up like George III, the mollusc king who never found his rock. We're all molluscs, and we all need our rocks, but some of us find it harder than others. Or something.
As Alanis Morrissette would say, isn't it ironic?
Who is L. Ron Hubbard? I think I recognise the name, but I'm not sure.
Sounds like you had a good night. Hope you're not too hungover.
NICE
Unfortunately I can't fall back on sleep as an excuse - sheer stupidity was my downfall.