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<~> on Haiku by heart 9 Oct 2002, 8:32 AM

would be better if the first line had more 'rigid cadence'.

<~> on Snack for the Shameless by New Life Drug 9 Oct 2002, 8:28 AM

yes. always so.

god'swife on Return to Kadath by razorgrin 9 Oct 2002, 8:23 AM

Hey razorgrin! Posting soon? Hadn't read this, actually come to think of it I may have overlooked your poems. Love the word pickman. The 2nd couplet is my favorite, even though "moon-trees brew" seemed awkward, or maybe because.

Blue Magpie on ITS A SHAMBLES by lukehanney 9 Oct 2002, 7:55 AM

With this club you're not affliated, This line is an inversion, not really a recommended technique for world shattering poets.

Blue Magpie on Possibilities by Nicholas Jones 9 Oct 2002, 7:37 AM

I fail to see how you can write about anything other than that which you know, even a complete fantasy is known in some way by the time it is written. Ah well that is just me.

Blue Magpie on Truths by Nicholas Jones 9 Oct 2002, 7:24 AM

I think there should be a comma, if not a semi colon after "thesis bound" Politics always seemed a lose - lose game to me.

Blue Magpie replying on Creativity. by Blue Magpie 9 Oct 2002, 7:16 AM

Hi Nicholas, Well yes it ispossible that I have the tools of a poet, or maybe I am slowly gaining them. However this poem was written with its ultimate intended audience as people who are not poets, the bulk of humanity. Thanks for responding to both my poems.

Katie on Which Side of Darkness by Wulf 9 Oct 2002, 7:12 AM

I'm sorry i didn't see this poem sooner. I love the poem you have writen here. It's an interesting perseptive, and flow. 10/10 =) And I can't wait to read more of your work =)

Blue Magpie replying on Friendship by Blue Magpie 9 Oct 2002, 7:10 AM

Hi Nicholas, Thanks for leaving a messasge, I must admit I am unsure how long I will keep working here, I have not found much to inspire me so far. But I will try not to judge too rapidly.

razorgrin on Drunken note #2 by blackball 9 Oct 2002, 7:05 AM

Pay no attention to jigg. I'm not usually one for this strucure, but damn fine work.

razorgrin on rapping on caffeine by blackball 9 Oct 2002, 7:03 AM

That's really damn good. Short but says a lot.

jrtails on ITS A SHAMBLES by lukehanney 9 Oct 2002, 6:45 AM

Absolutely bloody brilliant (and i don't usually say this) The way you include the atmosphere is superb, an overall fantastic poem!!!! All people who think different of this deserve a hiding!!

jrtails on Poem 479 by Nicholas Jones 9 Oct 2002, 6:21 AM

I agree this is an extremely gloomy prospect of a poem. Poetry is meant to be full of happiness and this is full of darkness, very dissapointing....

lukehanney on Losing Control by Tarquin De La Bog 9 Oct 2002, 6:07 AM

Excuse me Tarquin Del Boy Toilet. I agree with devina. Stop critiscing everyone, when your poems are rubbish and don't even rhyme. Don't you have the time to make them rhyme (By the Way(by REd Hot CHili Pepers) that did rhyme) Bye

lukehanney on why i look like a man by rosiebailey 9 Oct 2002, 6:04 AM

Trul beautiful Short, Precise and moving

Nicholas Jones on Plastic Man by lukehanney 9 Oct 2002, 5:54 AM

I've got to go now. I'll have words with you later.

Nicholas Jones on Plastic Man by lukehanney 9 Oct 2002, 5:53 AM

Bollocks. He nicked it off of the Kinks.

Nicholas Jones on Ode to Nicholas Jones by lukehanney 9 Oct 2002, 5:52 AM

See what can be achieved through not stealing song lyrics!

Nicholas Jones on Ode to Nicholas Jones by lukehanney 9 Oct 2002, 5:50 AM

Actually, this is bloody good.

Nicholas Jones on purple by youngweirdo 9 Oct 2002, 5:47 AM

There is poetry here. Of course there is. But it's not very good.