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jsab78 on From a letter (never sent) by UnityMitford 7 Oct 2002, 12:31 PM

To the point. Powerful. Honest. You did it right. Keep up the good work.

jsab78 on Words of Wisdom... by loneshadow29 7 Oct 2002, 12:30 PM

Interesting flow, definitely got the message. rock on man..I hear you

vulcan replying on A Gift of Beauty... by loneshadow29 7 Oct 2002, 11:56 AM

Thanks!happy you don't think so anymore!

loneshadow29 replying on A Gift of Beauty... by loneshadow29 7 Oct 2002, 11:38 AM

thanks for the comment... yeah, to be honest, I haven't looked at that page in such a long time... I don't even know why I put the address in my profile... things have changed a lot since its creation, or should I say, current state... I think I'll kill it... kiiiilll... uhh... sorry just kidding :o)

Nicholas Jones on Remembering You by dalva 7 Oct 2002, 8:48 AM

Sorry, but it doesn't do it for me. And I'm in a mean mood today. Too diffuse - try making it shorter and more intense.

Christof replying on Instructions to a Sculptor by Christof 7 Oct 2002, 8:48 AM

Oh I see - but yes! I'll be happy to receive anything you think I'll like!

Christof on Bottom by ThoughtfulSoul 7 Oct 2002, 8:47 AM

You need to punctuate and also it should be 'there are people' in line 2. I really do get the impression of your thoughts echoing around though.

vulcan replying on Instructions to a Sculptor by Christof 7 Oct 2002, 8:47 AM

Sorry I paint but I did not mean my own paintings!Masterpieces I meant.(but i believe I'll be one 20 years later.I'm serious about it)

Nicholas Jones on The Phoebe Snow by horus8 7 Oct 2002, 8:46 AM

Pitiful. Sorrry.

Christof replying on Instructions to a Sculptor by Christof 7 Oct 2002, 8:43 AM

Certainly, I didn't know you painted as well, that would be really interesting to see how your paintings reflect on your poems.

vulcan replying on Instructions to a Sculptor by Christof 7 Oct 2002, 8:42 AM

May I send you some painting now and then?

Nicholas Jones on Bottom by ThoughtfulSoul 7 Oct 2002, 8:41 AM

It is lonely at the bottom. Being lonely means that nothing cna be a comfort. Sometimes having no punctutation is good, but here it isn't.

Christof on Midnight Dream by Katie 7 Oct 2002, 8:38 AM

Maybe the Internet is a good place for the imagination to run free? I don't know. But you'd better hope Mum & Dad don't find out. They won't be keen on that kind of imaginative release.

Christof on The day I told her by dalva 7 Oct 2002, 8:36 AM

That takes guts... Good luck in the future.

Christof on Beyond Imagination by vulcan 7 Oct 2002, 8:32 AM

ACtually the ambiguity is great here, it's hard to get a handle on preicsely what's going on with the 'kitty', and the feeling of loss is somehow reflected in that

Christof on From a letter (never sent) by UnityMitford 7 Oct 2002, 8:30 AM

By the way, is Unity Mitford the one who went to Germany?

vulcan replying on A Musical Dream by vulcan 7 Oct 2002, 8:30 AM

Thanks Christof!will you have a look at my"Beyond Imagination?"

Christof on From a letter (never sent) by UnityMitford 7 Oct 2002, 8:30 AM

Stay away from the corners! Stay in the middle of the ring...Love as a constant battle. Well, how true.

Christof on A Musical Dream by vulcan 7 Oct 2002, 8:28 AM

I don't know much about Verdi, but this captures what impression I do have of it. Mysterious, heavy. Great

UnityMitford on Midnight Dream by Katie 7 Oct 2002, 8:25 AM

Naughty, naughty! Do your parents know you do this in the dark corners of your bedroom at night after they've gone to sleep?