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on The day I told her by dalva
7 Oct 2002, 8:20 AM
at least you had the balls to tell her.
Thank you. Ah yes, there are many ways to toussle someones tongue!
It's from Shelley's "Prometheous Unbound"and if you care to know I was listening to Brukner's Symphony no8's finale when I reached that line!(if I was alone some tragedy might have followed!)
...haven't you posted new poetry?
Don't know where the quote came from,but it fits. Beautiful.
Unexpectedly Nice, the tongue though seems well...
you tickle your feet with your hand and you toussle your tongue with a tongue.
Hi, I'm back. NO more catfights or I promise you a verbal duel.
I think if you start with"There at the bottom is a lonely place"it would seem as if you're speaking from there.(So the force of personality shall work better in that way).good!I like personally-felt poems.(I had something very much like this esp the end of it!i.e.I understand!)6/8
you should talk to doug soderstrom. he'd tell you why.
i love it when you get rough, unity.
metaphorical (from what i remember).
that's good. are the corners real or metaphorical...cuz if they're real theniwould agree with the lover; it would not be love...but if metaphorical...it makes for a good poem. i'm out 8/10
i like the line about "the artist's discretion". this is gonna sound stupid but after reading comments on this site and seeing how bitchy people can be about other people's work...well truer words have never been said dude. i'm out...please disregard my foolishness
It's a constant battle with the sleep monster, though this week I'm not using any "artificial" stimulants. Just me and my willpower and whatever unnatural chemistry I may have been blessed or cursed with (or whatever I can trick myself into believing). the writer's block is a bit worse than a little, unfortunately -- inspiration has left me high and dry for half a year. I'm sending in the cavalry of "keep trying and maybe something will work". Glad you're enjoying PR. =)
Still at war with the sleep monster I see. If you've got a little writers block, relax, inspiration will find you. In the meantime,hope all is well on the other side of my screen,and you're having sucess with your pets. Thanks for backing PR the way you do:)
got blasted eh? yeah it happens to the best of us. no worries. when everything looks to be going sour listen to some deftones and break some shit
Perhaps this some some sort of english class excerise in clicheness and this person wanted to share her assignment with the internet... well done i say!
nice, you nailed it, so when do we get to rp!?
depth and ambiguity... lovely