jauser
replying on The Sky by jauser
6 Oct 2002, 2:09 PM
Lol by the way, you hab good poem going on
kool
i think this poem is really good actually i understand what ur trying to say dariana, its a really really good poem
decent poem...everyday feelings. felt the same way myself
On the contrary, I think spelling is really important. No matter how good and powerful the spirit of a piece might be, it will get significantly less respect if it is full of spelling mistakes.
oh god these U's :) ! but now i'm not going to delete this poem to re-type it all .now before ..submitting ..i'll have to keep this in my head ;)...
Well then, I apologize to Mr. oTEPdrug. Apparently I'm trying to see how many times I can step on my tongue here. I'm doing a pretty good job too, I think.
Touching.
Dariana
on The wonderful happy relationship between two wonderful and caring people by Dark Angle
6 Oct 2002, 5:17 AM
Ridiculous!
I got lost in the length.
The spelling is of no big issue to me because I felt the depth of emotion displayed here.
To make light of a situation which takes many lives every day is rather disgusting. What is your point?
Are you Darren Day?
This is pants. Really, really pants. I'm very bored of people using sex to try and be shocking. Very tedious.
I think this is nicely shaped prose rather than poetry, but that's an observation rather than a criticism. Very nice, but I don't like the word f-hole.