Re: Waiting to be Consumed by Alizarin_Crimson	zodiac 213.186.177.137	10-May-05/3:19 AM
This was good, right up to "She is a blander confection".
Re: My Best Friend, 1985 by jessicazee	zodiac 213.186.177.137	10-May-05/3:17 AM
This poem is remarkably like My Life in the MidEast, 2005.
Re: Dying breed by INTRANSIT	jessicazee 152.163.100.135	10-May-05/12:55 AM
I want shorter lines, a hyphenated "broken eared," love "docking ballets." Didn't quite get the jist, unfortunately. Give me some more meat. 8.4
Re: Finding Gin and Santa by richa	jessicazee 152.163.100.135	10-May-05/12:52 AM
I read this out loud to myself. I'm lovin' it.
Re: Spirit In a Temple by peaceseeker	jessicazee 152.163.100.135	10-May-05/12:45 AM
I like the way your words resonate, but, okay, really, I am totally confused. It seems so personal...so much so that most readers can't/won't be able to relate. Maybe the point? Liked it anyway. 8.2
Re: Waiting to be Consumed by Alizarin_Crimson	some deleted user 81.69.23.196	9-May-05/8:23 PM
This is fun, but also a bit nauseating. The last four lines are very nice. The first one is a bit confusing because all of a sudden SHE appears to be a desert as well... '
Re: Gone Forever (in loving memory of a teacher) by Princess_Snowflake	some deleted user 81.69.23.196	9-May-05/8:09 PM
No, this is not exellente. The problem with Memorials like this one, is that it only moves the author and acquaintances of this teacher. Outsiders who read this don't give a damn. And that's what the poem should do: make people who don't know anything about this man and his (presumely untimely) death, CARE. I wonder; what made him so very 'around'? What made him so unforgettable? What's his 'wonderful legacy'? There is not a thing you shed light on, all you present here is a list of facts, a bunch of platitudes. It's totally devoid of a personal view, it does not give an image of this man, except the impression that he must have come close to being the next Jesus. You sob and cry, Princess, and you don't tell me why.
Re: AIDS in a van by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	some deleted user 81.69.23.196	9-May-05/7:35 PM
'From having gay sex with a man'. All my life I've been asking men: "Am I having gay sex with you, or hetero sex?" By the way; does Nature still fabricate amoebae like Blindproject217? Gasp.
Re: For the love of joey(revised) by mystic enoch	Hallmark 129.12.235.73	9-May-05/6:20 PM
Thanks, this is spiritually moving!
Re: Strings by Fayt	Hallmark 129.12.235.73	9-May-05/5:52 PM
Is this an attack on religion?
Re: Gone Forever (in loving memory of a teacher) by Princess_Snowflake	Hallmark 129.12.235.73	9-May-05/5:47 PM
Excellente!
Re: a comment on I smell coffee by Princess_Snowflake	Hallmark 129.12.235.73	9-May-05/5:40 PM
They're old enough when they leave school, and they leave school at 3:30.
Re: a comment on I smell coffee by Princess_Snowflake	Hallmark 129.12.235.73	9-May-05/5:39 PM
16 is old enough for coffee isn't it?
Re: Mistaken by midnight	Hallmark 129.12.235.73	9-May-05/5:33 PM
Poo also!
Re: The Magician by Hooman	Hallmark 129.12.235.73	9-May-05/5:32 PM
Poo!
Re: Afraid by LovePoet	Hallmark 129.12.235.73	9-May-05/5:30 PM
Brilliant! Smell my fear
Re: AIDS in a van by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	Hallmark 129.12.235.73	9-May-05/5:21 PM
Tut
Re: For the love of joey(revised) by mystic enoch	mendoju 4.186.114.13	9-May-05/4:00 PM
Oh My God, this was beautiful - you're quite the writer Enoch2. Mendoju (Joey's sister)
Re: Four Seasons by mystic enoch	mendoju 4.186.114.13	9-May-05/3:33 PM
Hi Enoch2, I thought your poem was wonderful, it took me back to my childhood! I'm gonna print it and have my brother Joey read it - I'm sure he'll enjoy your beautiful words. Bye...Judy
Re: Fate by Fayt	mystic enoch 209.215.39.12	9-May-05/12:07 PM
It controls your actions in everyway.