Re: Dying breed by INTRANSIT	mystic enoch 209.215.39.12	9-May-05/11:32 AM
that was very interesting. it made me really think about what I was reading. I had to read it a second time. It is on my favorites list.
Re: a comment on Dying breed by INTRANSIT	INTRANSIT 204.110.228.254	9-May-05/9:56 AM
DOH! Too bad it's not iambic. I tried to spondee while playing twister in a truckstop parking lot with some midgets. I kicked myself in the eye. Here are my problems with it: cross bridges of thought- is good but OF COURSE they're un-dewed. Bridges keep you out of the water, duh. And I think it's a bit of a leap to the closer, a chronic problem I seem to have. I appreciate your time though. Thanks!
Re: Old Friend by Dovina	al-naafiysh 204.215.33.110	9-May-05/2:32 AM
The poem is very nice.It's sad about the pet.
Re: Old Friend by Dovina	zodiac 212.118.19.234	8-May-05/11:12 PM
The first two lines are straight from crystal lane swift. The rest is good.
Re: Strings by Fayt	zodiac 212.118.19.234	8-May-05/11:10 PM
1) Why have you added this poem to your favorites list? 2) This is absurd. Simply absurd. 3) And as far as "an idea beyond any other" goes - well, it's not. There've been lots of silly people covering this ground before you, and better.
Re: Agoraphobia in a Secret Garden by darylchew	zodiac 212.118.19.234	8-May-05/11:01 PM
Drop the word "Secret" from the title. The Garden of Eden isn't exactly secret, especially considering the earth's entire human population at the time knew about it.
Re: Dying breed by INTRANSIT	zodiac 212.118.19.234	8-May-05/10:52 PM
Really great. I think you mean "Broken", not "Boken", but I could be wrong. Also, "country's" instead of "countrys". Have you read E. Annie Proulx's short story "Brokeback Mountain"? It offers an interesting theory as to why cowboys are a dying breed.
Re: Maybe my answer is maybe by Prince of Void	zodiac 212.118.19.234	8-May-05/10:47 PM
I don't understand. So your way of living life to its fullest is to avoid even the possibility of giving a real answer?
Re: a comment on a way to pass time by unknown^user	zodiac 212.118.19.234	8-May-05/10:32 PM
Silly. unknown^user hasn't written about anybody or anybody's world. That much should be obvious. Besides, I don't get Law & Order in my world (though I do, Alhamidulillah, get a watered-down 'Daily Show' about once a week). I dissed you because your poems are the most consistently essay-like on poemranker. About half the time, they're the most user's-manual-like, actually.
Re: Old Friend by Dovina	some deleted user 81.69.23.196	8-May-05/4:41 PM
I like this a lot, for its simplicity and sincerity. It's the 'cannot' that hurts somehow. It hurts the poem, is what I mean...
Re: a comment on Go now if you want it. by Fayt	some deleted user 81.69.23.196	8-May-05/4:36 PM
Faith Sorry,'Fate'is what I mean
Re: a comment on Go now if you want it. by Fayt	some deleted user 81.69.23.196	8-May-05/4:34 PM
What I regret in your poems (which get high ratings, I saw) is your 'hang-up' on certain themes: 'faith', 'darkness', 'otherworld'. It's like you are afraid we won't grasp that the poem is about Faith, Darkness or the Otherworld. Your gothics (and basically any kind of poem) would be enhanced if you sought alternatives to these words. And again, I dislike those capitals all throughout quite a lot...
Re: Finding Gin and Santa by richa	richa 81.178.233.122	8-May-05/12:44 PM
Dear Mr Nentwined. Can poemranker spell seance properly?
Re: Panama by Dovina	INTRANSIT 204.110.228.254	8-May-05/9:09 AM
dAAmnit girl! Um, this isn't people , is it? I can't wait to get home whee i'll have time to THINK!
Re: Old Friend by Dovina	INTRANSIT 204.110.228.254	8-May-05/8:58 AM
Interesting. Starting out with a playful rhyme and then it gets all serious. I don't think it does the pet justice, though. do it again.
Re: Strings by Fayt	Dovina 69.175.32.185	7-May-05/1:31 PM
Please stop recycling old poems under a new username.
Re: Go now if you want it. by Fayt	Dovina 69.175.32.185	7-May-05/6:55 AM
"Faith in the face of light" is the basis of all such hocus-pocus. I hope you mean this as satire.
Re: Fate by Fayt	Dovina 69.175.32.185	7-May-05/6:47 AM
If this is true, you can do anything you want because it is not you making the choice, and nobody is responsible.
Re: a way to pass time by unknown^user	Dovina 69.175.32.185	7-May-05/6:40 AM
He says its good because you've written about him, his world, no longer listening, indefinite, but still real. Hey, this really is good. I've raised my vote.
Re: a way to pass time by unknown^user	zodiac 212.118.19.111	7-May-05/4:56 AM
This is good. Don't listen to Dovina. Like she'd know.