on some deleted poem
10 Oct 2002, 4:18 AM
This is much better. Traditional but well done. I don't hold the 'garbage' comment against you.
on some deleted poem
16 Oct 2002, 2:26 AM
Top stuff. Some chaps like to keep their dry goods dry but they're jsut fooling themselves. Also, I like your metal and bluegrass tastes. The banjo is a fine fine instrument and I may work on a way to cross-breed bluegrass and metal- metalgrass? Anyway, it would be fantastic.
on Bowstones, 21st June 200 by Nicholas Jones
15 Oct 2002, 7:30 AM
Yes are good at sens eof palce, and tying it in with personal reminiscence to come up with something really resonant. Really strong.
on Breeze by Nicholas Jones
15 Oct 2002, 7:32 AM
very suggestive and neutral (in a good way)
on simple silence by daniella
15 Oct 2002, 7:38 AM
Oh yes, this is great. pared down to the finest possible point.
on unlucky by rosiebailey
15 Oct 2002, 7:52 AM
You could at least have rhymed the third couplet! You have an unfortunate life. Are you still a man?
on our morning bed by daniella
15 Oct 2002, 7:54 AM
This is great. I'm really enjoying your stuff, Daniella. The fragility of these images catches at the throat.
on where once by daniella
15 Oct 2002, 7:56 AM
I like the transformation imagery and the idea of life changing and the constant drive of fertility.
on cornered invitation by daniella
15 Oct 2002, 7:58 AM
Very good - really rather erotic, i find, in a blitzed out way. Should 'them on the corner' be 'they'? Never mind. I love the sweat and the flesh of this.
on Rummage Sales by jessicazee
15 Oct 2002, 9:35 AM
I like the progression of this from street to street - there's something very solemn about the ending, the seriousness of leisure.
on One Country by poetandknowit
15 Oct 2002, 9:38 AM
I'm sorry, I don't know enough Spanish (or indeed any Spanish) and so parts of this are completely opaque to me. But then I guess it's not for me, is it Mrs God? How things have blossomed since I've been away! Oh and happy birthday P&K - I turn 29 next week.
on d e e p e r by daniella
15 Oct 2002, 9:42 AM
If it reminds me of any Beatle it's George - 'Within You Without You', that kind of thing.
on Safe Distance, 10-10-02 by Frass
11 Oct 2002, 1:41 AM
It must be strange, knwoing someone who's a victim of this weirdo. Thanks for your comment by the way - I don't know why 'Instructions to a Sculptor' has taken off in the way it has, but it makes me happy!
on some deleted poem
10 Oct 2002, 2:52 AM
This is great. The senses are thoroughly stroked and stoked. All this beautiful abundance!
on Walk in a dream (an ode to self help poems) by Bachus
10 Oct 2002, 2:58 AM
You didn't really need the last bit. It was quite realistically satirical as it was.
on why i look like a man by rosiebailey
15 Oct 2002, 7:49 AM
Rosie - this is the future. Youa re a visionary.
on words our Father by daniella
15 Oct 2002, 8:00 AM
What is the madness? The faith or the doubt of the faith? I don't quite get this.