Never assume about those whom you know not.

Thanks, I love you, too.

Looking at shapes in the clouds is most commonly thought of as a childs' past-time. I switched to rhyme at the half-way mark because I wanted to show the adult reverting to a child. The ending is the child reverting back to the adult, realizing that there are things that must be done before a vacation is due.

Thank you.

I wrote this song 5 years, and all I wanted was some CONSTRUCTIVE criticism. But I now see that you are unable to think that much. Sorry for making your small mind hurt.

It would be a lot more helpful if you just repost the comment. Thanks.

I changed what I felt should be changed.

wing ---> wings
were ---> are

I have never heard that song before in my life. Wow.

The Witch is hiding from her family. She is a closet Witch. The reference to the curtain is her revealing her true beliefs to her family and friends.

This a poem of Mother Earth. It is a description, but it is an immortalization of Her life cycle.

I never said that I was going to be grammatically correct. Honestly, I know when something is wrong, but I like the 'built-in' mistakes. They show more unbridled emotion.

Nice idea, but it makes it sound like he killed himself. He died in a car accident.

I also want it a bit vague.

Yes.

Exactly.

The stout man is the lady's ex-lover, whom she left for someone who looks better. He is a representation of how looks can alter choices when it comes to who loves whom.

I'm curious to know how that picture is relevant to the poem.

This poem was written for a friend of mine. After she told about her suicide attempt.