Comments byDovina, 2081–2100 back, including replies. Only comments on poems

replying on Posted Pelicans by Dovina 10 Nov 2005, 6:39 AM

I see now that your passion will never subside. You will clutter each and every poem, mine or not, until I give in to you and answer why I said blacks are the most different from whites, or retract it. Well ok then. I now commit to doing that, but it will take some time which I don’t have now. Perhaps this will abate the onslaught.
replying on Sonata for Robin and Poet by Dovina 10 Nov 2005, 6:34 AM
Alert and standing vertical with respect to his center of gravity. Actually there's no other way to stand without falling.
replying on Sonata for Robin and Poet by Dovina 10 Nov 2005, 6:32 AM
No good reason for the candle. It's just in keeping with the image of a poet who holds a candle and mirror to society. I read it somewhere.
on I LOVE A PROSTITUTE by Bhaskaryya 8 Nov 2005, 2:48 PM
Yeah, love the unlovable and thumb your nose at those who sneer. Then take her, as in the last line, and drive far away.
replying on Sonata for Robin and Poet by Dovina 8 Nov 2005, 2:35 PM
Probably not, I haven't smelled it.
replying on The Other by Caducus 8 Nov 2005, 2:34 PM
My bad - turtle envy?
replying on Alone With Memories by Mona Lisa 8 Nov 2005, 2:32 PM
I looked at your homepage. You are from England with blond hair. This must be about someone else.
on Alone With Memories by Mona Lisa 8 Nov 2005, 2:30 PM
Why did he go into the bathroom grey? And why the British spelling of gray? Wasn't this in the morning? In evening he might be gray with dirt.

"had heard" could be just heard.
replying on Sonata for Robin and Poet by Dovina 8 Nov 2005, 12:23 PM
Read "Lady Bradbury's Excursion" then reconsider.
replying on The Other by Caducus 8 Nov 2005, 12:19 PM
No, I've always remained sheltered, shelled perhaps.
replying on the band by celticskatermatt1 8 Nov 2005, 12:18 PM
Please notice the sequence. I was not talking to you.
on The Other by Caducus 8 Nov 2005, 11:30 AM
The last verse is especially nice. Low skirt, at arms length, closer now.

The tortise image is hard to imagine, but the rest of Verse 1 makes the scene clear.

Verse 3 seems contorted as if Line 4 should be Line 2.
replying on the band by celticskatermatt1 8 Nov 2005, 10:32 AM
Are you like 18?
replying on Steak and Satin by Dovina 8 Nov 2005, 10:27 AM
The original topic of this conversation is not whether -=Dark_Angel=-,P.I. is racist. Try again, and actually read this time.
replying on Posted Pelicans by Dovina 8 Nov 2005, 10:24 AM
Obviously not!
replying on Sonata for Robin and Poet by Dovina 8 Nov 2005, 10:22 AM
Thanks Mona. That goes for all who do not admit to being masters.
replying on Sonata for Robin and Poet by Dovina 8 Nov 2005, 10:22 AM
Thanks Z. The writing of crap poetry has been my goal for a long time now. It’s good to find some budding appreciation.
replying on Sonata for Robin and Poet by Dovina 8 Nov 2005, 10:21 AM
Thanks, C.
replying on Sonata for Robin and Poet by Dovina 8 Nov 2005, 10:20 AM
Okay, it was a weak girlish kick. I will try again only after you kick back with a genuine comment on the poem.
on the band by celticskatermatt1 7 Nov 2005, 6:25 PM
I'd rather play my own tune, make it ryhm, tap its rythm, than to settle for the band. That would be real.