on Pop Quiz by steven adams
8 Oct 2004, 10:14 AM
As Samantha, I ignore them. As Steven, I'd have to act macho with a joke.
replying on DUKE BLOBBY;;;;; by MR Blobby
8 Oct 2004, 3:54 AM
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on DUKE BLOBBY;;;;; by MR Blobby
7 Oct 2004, 9:09 AM
There was a certain king
who had ten thousand men
He marched them up the hill one day
and marched them down again.
And when you're up, you're up
And when you're down, you're down
and when you're only half way up,
you're neither up n0or down.
who had ten thousand men
He marched them up the hill one day
and marched them down again.
And when you're up, you're up
And when you're down, you're down
and when you're only half way up,
you're neither up n0or down.
on The Mortician: Scourge of the pen. by SupremeDreamer
7 Oct 2004, 8:58 AM
Some good thoughts here, especially that a mortician is there "to facilitate the apathetic-but-proper
disposal of the soul."
disposal of the soul."
replying on One True Instant by Dovina
7 Oct 2004, 5:54 AM
Is this a malady among husbands? I thought I was talking about just one. Good to hear you were got anyway.
replying on Black Woman by jroday
7 Oct 2004, 5:50 AM
Appology accepted.
replying on One True Instant by Dovina
7 Oct 2004, 5:48 AM
Surely you are not that husband. Thanks.
replying on Death's Invitation by eliastemplar
6 Oct 2004, 10:31 AM
May he see your coin as a shield reflecting any arrow he might aim, and Afganistan as a place that's already taken too much. If I were in charge, they would send middle-aged women like me to war and spare the young folks.
replying on Lady Bradburyâs Excursion by Dovina
6 Oct 2004, 10:09 AM
Not too amusing, please.
replying on One True Instant by Dovina
6 Oct 2004, 10:08 AM
Not confusion, different processing.
on Death's Invitation by eliastemplar
6 Oct 2004, 10:04 AM
I have a letter that might as well be around my neck reminding of a narrow escape, and in a bargain with the grim reaper, there's the stones of a crumbled foundation accross a wooded path. Thanks for the reminder.
replying on One True Instant by Dovina
6 Oct 2004, 9:59 AM
A great thing about poetry is that what I think when writing is not necessarily the thought arising in a reader. Thank you.
on Better All The Time by wilco
6 Oct 2004, 7:49 AM
At least you're off the marriage binge.
on Big fanny by keatsImnot
4 Oct 2004, 5:37 AM
Some good thoughts here, some bad grammar. I don't like the title. Either that or I did not get the connection.
on All At Last by nocturnalism
4 Oct 2004, 5:33 AM
The country's not really all that bad. Some crap, yes. But some good stuff too.
on What is a poet by INTRANSIT
4 Oct 2004, 5:30 AM
How do porcupines make love, particularly the hair-trigger kind? I ask because of this poisonous twitch. It's getting in the way.
on hauntingly sad beauty of death by Prince of Void
3 Oct 2004, 11:36 AM
Some good thoughts here, but the title gives you away. I'd rather see a title that only hints. And some grammar glytches make it choppy.
on A Portrait of Antonio Machado (Edit) by Sasha
3 Oct 2004, 11:13 AM
Your poetry comes from some "tranquil spring" and you are truly "good"???? I was about to criticize, but then I looked at my own reasons for this futility and find find them just as ridiculous.
on Crushing Gingersnaps (beat) by INTRANSIT
3 Oct 2004, 11:04 AM
You're getting all choppy on us, truckdriver, swerving all over the beaten path like a meverick mermaid's man in a mania. Is this a kind of second childhood? Not bad in a punk sort of way.