poemranker ::20 most recent comments by Dovina (4201-4220) and replies

Comments byDovina, 4201–4220 back, including replies. Only comments on poems

on Mephistophelian Seductress by SupremeDreamer 29 Aug 2004, 9:39 AM
Ah, to seduce him as a female Mephistopheles devil, kind but candid, unlike the women who have nothing of value to say.
on Delicate Was by klosterfobik 29 Aug 2004, 9:08 AM
Very nice. The last line seems redundent or not needed.
on Andrew by Spindle 29 Aug 2004, 9:04 AM
Too much cliche.
replying on What Has It Gotten Us? by Dovina 29 Aug 2004, 8:59 AM
And less than I bargained for, too. Overall, women’s lib has helped women, but it has its moments.
replying on St. Patrick’s Cathedral by Dovina 28 Aug 2004, 7:27 PM
Envy is the wrong word for what feel when I see religious people comforted through their religion. Envy implies ill will because of another’s advantage. I wish to have their comfort, but know that because of my reservations I cannot. Among my misgivings is the fear of hope such as an ostrich has when its head is in the sand. (Actually, I don’t think ostriches do that.)
People want to believe — to hold a position on something. It does not have to make sense. Discrepancies are expunged for them by faith. So religion provides substance for their faith, and in so doing, it gives its parishioners psychological advantage in the storms of life. Your argument for applying real solutions through research and philanthropic funding (instead of spending money on cathedrals and such) makes sense. But people have always looked to gods and probably always will. There’s advantage for them; we might as well acknowledge it.
replying on abortion by darylchew 28 Aug 2004, 6:38 PM
I read it again that way and it makes a lot of sense, even the Yoda voice. I raised it to 9.
replying on abortion by darylchew 28 Aug 2004, 6:15 PM
Then who flung it, and how is that revenge?
replying on St. Patrick’s Cathedral by Dovina 28 Aug 2004, 6:12 PM
Yes, lobotomized people feel neither grief nor comfort, I am told. So, why not have your frontal lobe severed when in grief? I don't think the procedure is done anymore. And if it were, that ends all emotion. This seems like way too simple a question, and too simple an answer. You must be asking something else. Or do you belong to the First Church of Lobotomy?
replying on St. Patrick’s Cathedral by Dovina 28 Aug 2004, 2:40 PM
Besides the reasons wilco gives, religion is important for its magnificent churches where I can go on a hot summer day and sit for awhile contemplating its long history, the craftsmen who planned and carved, and the peasants who thought it important enough to give their money for its construction.
on abortion by darylchew 28 Aug 2004, 2:20 PM
Sounds like an angry prayer. How is your death avenged?
on 32 Truths and 1 Lie by wilco 28 Aug 2004, 2:08 PM
From my POV there are less than 32 truths here and more than one lie. Still, it's a nice collection of sayings and could-be-trues.
on NO TIME!! by Brandy_n_Cali 28 Aug 2004, 1:46 PM
I read this yesterday and did not comment because I did not understand what you are saying. Perhaps you are holding a criminal who will soon be executed. Perhaps the person is terminally ill. Something is urgent in time, but what?
replying on A Piñon Planter by Dovina 28 Aug 2004, 1:36 PM
I will assume you have read more than five today. Thanks.
replying on St. Patrick’s Cathedral by Dovina 28 Aug 2004, 1:34 PM
And for those of us who have not the strength for those declarations, there is always TS Eliot’s “I should have been a pair of ragged claws, scuttling across the floors of silent seas.” But there is time, up to a point, for change, “And time yet for a hundred indecisions, and for a hundred visions and revisions.”
replying on St. Patrick’s Cathedral by Dovina 28 Aug 2004, 1:27 PM
I am always questioning. Faith, logic, and death are subjects that don’t rest well when put together in my head. Most people in the world settle on some religion to help them through the dilemmas and conflicts these three present, and they hold to the ideals of their upbringing or to others they have found along the way. They build elaborate doctrinal structures and elaborate cathedrals, which seem to anchor them to what they hope is true. Religion is important because it provides comfort in their times of need and grief. I often wish I could be so comforted.
replying on A Piñon Planter by Dovina 27 Aug 2004, 3:16 PM
I’m appalled that my raven, with his physical adversity, and his noble rising above the common crowd of ravens, did not inspire the same admiration we bestow on certain Olympic athletes who, in spite of injury, disease and economic poverty rise to glory.
replying on Countervail by D. $ Fontera 27 Aug 2004, 11:07 AM
My mind suddenly went from sharp to dull when he turned on me and pushed its sharpness against the wall, pressing closer, intensifying my plight, and bringing the stench of fear, flooding me until I felt empty with his pitiless demise.

Or at least that's what I feel.
replying on Faith by Dovina 27 Aug 2004, 10:40 AM
I'm surprised nobody complained about the line, "of wet sods beside a cold house in ’04" Now there's a line that cries out for mudslinging.
on solitude by darylchew 27 Aug 2004, 9:55 AM
Poems about suicide either relieve the tendency or increase it. Some of them make suicide look ordinary and alright, an individual choice, and not unkind. Some folks may vote you down because you have said nothing about a rather permanent decision and all that it ignores. I am one of them.
replying on faces unknown by daggatolar 27 Aug 2004, 9:42 AM
Please tell me what the considerable theme is, because I'm at a loss.