on Remember by psychedelic
8 Aug 2004, 9:33 AM
very chocolate boxy
on Outhouse by newagepoet2000
30 Jul 2004, 4:55 PM
Hmmm interesting thoughts, bet I know where you were when you thought of this one.................
on California triolets by zodiac
30 Jul 2004, 4:54 PM
very nicely done
on One Lump Or Two? by OneFingerAnswer
14 Jul 2004, 2:12 PM
Liked this one................
on Eros, and Psycho by horus8
14 Jul 2004, 2:10 PM
Very enjoyable
replying on Tale of a mermaid by sanity
5 Jul 2004, 2:02 PM
it is the tale of a mermaid who once her path was chosen she would never be able to return to her life as a mermaid, so yes, it was impassable
on EGG by ?-Dave_Mysterious-?
5 Jul 2004, 7:20 AM
A very interesting piece, a style I have not seen before, are we saying what we would like for dinner? hehehehe......... very funny.............
replying on Your sad goodbye by sanity
4 Jul 2004, 8:48 AM
there is a name for it, I created it myself and named it seicinque, thi8s is a multiple seicinque, the basis is
line 1 6 syllables
lines2,3,4. 5 syllables
you can have one stanza or multiples of and the rhyming scheme is aBCb dBCb eBCb and so on, try it, it's quite challenging and you can use any subjest matter with it........
line 1 6 syllables
lines2,3,4. 5 syllables
you can have one stanza or multiples of and the rhyming scheme is aBCb dBCb eBCb and so on, try it, it's quite challenging and you can use any subjest matter with it........
on The Western World by mrpresident
4 Jul 2004, 1:06 AM
I really like this, it tells of someone who is stuck maybe in a dead end job and just ants to be free........
Wobderful............
Wobderful............