on swallow it by anonandonandon
14 Jul 2004, 9:45 PM
a darn sight better than voicing her swallows
on some deleted poem
20 Jul 2004, 10:24 AM
lovely
on some deleted poem
15 Jul 2004, 1:10 PM
the "spoil it" line spoiled it for you?
:-) appropriate
:-) appropriate
on some deleted poem
15 Jul 2004, 1:14 PM
the line breaks are a bit arbitrary-- but i think it helps in reading aloud (or under your breath). at least for me; i wrote it how i would talk it.
on some deleted poem
13 Jul 2004, 5:53 AM
i like it
except you misspelled QUIDDITCH
except you misspelled QUIDDITCH
on Searching by dougsoderstrom
11 Jul 2004, 7:30 PM
the opposite of wisdom is also wisdom
the rubbish tin glimmers if the lighting is right
the underground rails will take us from the night
the rubbish tin glimmers if the lighting is right
the underground rails will take us from the night
on Searching by dougsoderstrom
11 Jul 2004, 7:33 PM
ps
I'd like it better without the "!"
I'd like it better without the "!"