on St. Patrickâs Cathedral by Dovina
27 Aug 2004, 12:03 AM
sad and beautiful
on some deleted poem
27 Aug 2004, 12:04 AM
you damn fool. nice poem.
on some deleted poem
2 Aug 2004, 8:13 PM
wow. care for a cigarette?
on Consolation by Dovina
2 Aug 2004, 12:14 PM
is he dead, in the ground -- and she has to dig him up?
a poem about euthanasia, or a failed relationship.
a poem about euthanasia, or a failed relationship.
on some deleted poem
31 Jul 2004, 12:56 PM
and thank you doug!
on Harvester of Sorrow by frdup717
2 Aug 2004, 8:16 PM
truly, you are the devil.
what about gluttony?
brutal and swift -- like the Horsemen. like it
what about gluttony?
brutal and swift -- like the Horsemen. like it
on Harvester of Sorrow by frdup717
2 Aug 2004, 8:17 PM
you sir, are the devil.
what about gluttony?
swift and brutal -- like the horsemen - 8 -
what about gluttony?
swift and brutal -- like the horsemen - 8 -
on I'M STILL IN LOVE WITH YOU by massangel62
31 Jul 2004, 1:26 PM
oh wait, it's a guy. same deal!
on THEY SAY YOU ARE AN ANGEL by massangel62
31 Jul 2004, 1:39 PM
please peter-- take her back!
on I'M STILL IN LOVE WITH YOU by massangel62
31 Jul 2004, 1:25 PM
quickly, get her back--before you have to write any more poems like these
on some deleted poem
31 Jul 2004, 12:53 PM
correctly ascertained dovina!
when you spell it out under the hot lights of stilted prose, self-indulgent sadness loses its appeal, becoming this grotesque monstrosity of a poem. much better to be happy. (though the people who sell us pop music would not have it that way...)
when you spell it out under the hot lights of stilted prose, self-indulgent sadness loses its appeal, becoming this grotesque monstrosity of a poem. much better to be happy. (though the people who sell us pop music would not have it that way...)
on some deleted poem
29 Jul 2004, 8:42 PM
you kidding? last line + 'five course dinner' is linchpin (see title)
on some deleted poem
29 Jul 2004, 8:53 PM
Kerry... what is he, some kind of politican?
9 for chutzpah
9 for chutzpah
on The bad news is his bones are like rubber by Venus
29 Jul 2004, 8:56 PM
cryptic likes a monkey
on Mors Omnia Solvit by shit
29 Jul 2004, 9:02 PM
my preferred translation of your luscious title is 'death melts everything' (6 years of Latin not for nothing)... if only this were a poem about microwaves.
on some deleted poem
28 Jul 2004, 9:18 PM
nb -- definitely works best if read aloud
on some deleted poem
6 Sep 2004, 5:10 PM
how I wish we all could say it
on Your Embrace by Brandy_n_Cali
12 Sep 2004, 6:10 PM
more than just a friendly game of twister -9-
but why the change from 'you' to 'him'?
but why the change from 'you' to 'him'?
on some deleted poem
12 Sep 2004, 6:13 PM
smile-inducing. I would cut out the "I'm sure" in the last line though. -9-