poemranker ::20 most recent comments by patty t (21-40)

Comments bypatty t, 21–40 back. Include replies

on some deleted poem 12 Sep 2004, 6:14 PM
perfect
on Ichobod Racecar by T. Jonathron Remp 12 Sep 2004, 6:15 PM
don't they call themselves the 'roma'? -9-
on some deleted poem 5 Oct 2004, 4:21 PM
nb 'loonie' is a one dollar coin
on Moses by Dovina 18 Nov 2004, 1:28 PM
but he never got to see the promised land
on People by hendrimike 6 Dec 2004, 8:27 PM
lacks chemistry, rhetoric
on Math Poem 3 by Dovina 2 Jan 2005, 8:36 PM
very snappy - though, your example is more of a logical tautology than math

-9-

here's one I wrote a while ago


Math vs poetry

its radius is one-half the diameter
the area: r-squared, by pi
for years I was chained to a perfect circle
the Formulae kept me from asking, why?
on Math Poem 2 by Dovina 2 Jan 2005, 6:44 PM
the 'too'/'two' pun is telegraphed - saw it coming a mile away. -8-
on some deleted poem 2 Jan 2005, 6:57 PM
-8- minus one for pandering to current events.

would suck to be caught scuba diving in that
on some deleted poem 2 Jan 2005, 7:24 PM
would you call a supermarket in the carribean a TROPICAL AISLE-LAND?

-9-
on some deleted poem 23 Jan 2005, 7:58 PM
alternate title: "How to add melodrama to your local watering hole"
on Feudal Conflict by Dovina 24 Jan 2005, 8:02 PM
title: "Prima donna." I'd give that a 9.
on some deleted poem 15 Apr 2005, 2:18 PM
I knew it - this poem is way too subversive, even for poemranker. Hence the 5 it was given (which is the most deceptively subversive ranking of them all).

Screw you guys, I'm giving myself a 10.
on some deleted poem 27 Apr 2005, 1:17 PM
30 views, but neither comments nor votes. is it really that breathtaking? Tsk, I give myself an 8.
on some deleted poem 28 May 2005, 7:19 PM
you poor thing.

I like your economy.
on some deleted poem 28 May 2005, 7:22 PM
'depilated' doesn't fit.

I like it.
on some deleted poem 2 Jul 2005, 7:27 PM
dammit, you could have at least tried
on some deleted poem 5 Jul 2005, 8:39 PM
Sounds like two oranges being nailed together. I'd give it an 11 if I could. Since I can't, I'll give it a 4.
on some deleted poem 5 Jul 2005, 8:45 PM
hear the pun about the crotch? It's a real groiner.
on Stream of Consciousness (#1) by Enkidu 14 Aug 2005, 7:10 AM
how dare you fart in my face.
on Letter from Palermo by Caducus 23 Aug 2005, 4:50 PM
I want to go to Palermo and beat the crap out of somebody or give them all roses