poemranker ::20 most recent comments by patty t (21-40) and replies

Comments bypatty t, 21–40 back, including replies. Only comments on poems

on Letter from Palermo by Caducus 23 Aug 2005, 4:50 PM
I want to go to Palermo and beat the crap out of somebody or give them all roses
on Stream of Consciousness (#1) by Enkidu 14 Aug 2005, 7:10 AM
how dare you fart in my face.
replying on All You Need Is Gloves by -=DIABETES=- 25 Apr 2005, 5:39 PM
I disagree; keep it as 'IS' - going with the gramatically correct choice would completely throw off the Lennon cadence.

Actually, with rhythmic considerations in mind, maybe change it to 'A glove (sing) is all you need' not 'gloves is' (plural)
on Feudal Conflict by Dovina 24 Jan 2005, 8:02 PM
title: "Prima donna." I'd give that a 9.
replying on Math Poem 3 by Dovina 4 Jan 2005, 6:41 PM
i'm saying that a facile statement like "a thing divided by a third of itself equals three" (x/x/3)=3) isn't a (mathematical) theorem AT ALL, but a mere logical/notational (if not grammatical) truism. mathematics is interesting because it can make conclusions about things that aren't immediately obvious. statements that are tautologic like 1=1 are, strictly speaking, mathematically uninteresting, and it does a disservice to serious thought to call such things math.

if you want to take the euclidean view, and say that ALL math is a priori and analytic (ie based fundamentally on logical axioms), then you should go back and live with Newton in the 17th century. Non-euclidean spaces, Einstein and a fellow named Kurt Godel have proven false the notion that logic and math are identical.

ok I'll stop ranting now, b/c it's way past the point of being helpful to the poem :)
replying on Math Poem 3 by Dovina 4 Jan 2005, 6:23 PM
that's like saying poetry is art; art is poetry - an altogether facile/reductionist statement. we're supposed to be precise with language here - calling math and logic the same thing is too flip for my taste.

ps both words are greek in origin (logos - 'word' or 'study'; math - from word meaning 'understanding'); why bother with two words if they mean the same thing?


replying on Math Poem 3 by Dovina 3 Jan 2005, 9:22 PM
yes, I see that of course -- I'm just saying your title gives mathematicians a bad name. I would call it "Logic Poem."
on Math Poem 3 by Dovina 2 Jan 2005, 8:36 PM
very snappy - though, your example is more of a logical tautology than math

-9-

here's one I wrote a while ago


Math vs poetry

its radius is one-half the diameter
the area: r-squared, by pi
for years I was chained to a perfect circle
the Formulae kept me from asking, why?
on Math Poem 2 by Dovina 2 Jan 2005, 6:44 PM
the 'too'/'two' pun is telegraphed - saw it coming a mile away. -8-
on People by hendrimike 6 Dec 2004, 8:27 PM
lacks chemistry, rhetoric
replying on The Rockets’ Song by Dovina 6 Dec 2004, 8:09 PM
Those who find phalluses (phalli?) in everything have their heads up their ass. It happens to be a very useful shape, whether for cocks, rockets, train tunnels, or rifles. That's all it is - a useful shape. The world needs to get over it.
on Moses by Dovina 18 Nov 2004, 1:28 PM
but he never got to see the promised land
on Ichobod Racecar by T. Jonathron Remp 12 Sep 2004, 6:15 PM
don't they call themselves the 'roma'? -9-
on Your Embrace by Brandy_n_Cali 12 Sep 2004, 6:10 PM
more than just a friendly game of twister -9-

but why the change from 'you' to 'him'?
on End by Dovina 6 Sep 2004, 5:08 PM
you fool. go get him.
on St. Patrick’s Cathedral by Dovina 27 Aug 2004, 12:03 AM
sad and beautiful
on Harvester of Sorrow by frdup717 2 Aug 2004, 8:17 PM
you sir, are the devil.

what about gluttony?

swift and brutal -- like the horsemen - 8 -
on Harvester of Sorrow by frdup717 2 Aug 2004, 8:16 PM
truly, you are the devil.

what about gluttony?

brutal and swift -- like the Horsemen. like it
on Consolation by Dovina 2 Aug 2004, 12:14 PM
is he dead, in the ground -- and she has to dig him up?

a poem about euthanasia, or a failed relationship.

on THEY SAY YOU ARE AN ANGEL by massangel62 31 Jul 2004, 1:39 PM
please peter-- take her back!