poemranker ::20 most recent comments by god

Comments bygod, the 20 most recent. Include replies

on some deleted poem 11 Sep 2002, 10:26 AM
Thy poeme is not overweight but overdone and underweight sirrah-get thee hence
on some deleted poem 11 Sep 2002, 10:16 AM
Contempteraneous
on some deleted poem 24 Aug 2002, 3:16 AM
Really quite good
on the lips of your mouth by silvertongueddevil 24 Aug 2002, 3:17 AM
Ok-7/10
on some deleted poem 24 Aug 2002, 3:22 AM
maybe this is it ?
on some deleted poem 11 Sep 2002, 10:14 AM
Were you drunk when you wrote this dear ?-I remember you getting out of bed and comng back smelling of the drink-I had no idea you did stuff like this !
on None by poemreader 11 Sep 2002, 10:17 AM
Seems a little confused and confusing-have another go and see if you can understand it first !
on some deleted poem 11 Sep 2002, 10:24 AM
Your sorrow hath eaten up my
sufferance. I see you are obsequious in your love,
and I profess requital to a hair's breadth......nay a scare crow
on Winter by morffrom 11 Sep 2002, 10:12 AM
Maybe its not quite a butterfly yet, still coming out of the chrysalis !-anyway the poet seems to be indicating that the premature death of any creature is a cause for sorrow, a buddhist credo of which even tarquin should be aware-I agree with him 8/10
on some deleted poem 1 Sep 2002, 4:16 AM
This is your weakest to date. I agree with some of what has been said above. Also quite unlike you, you have not checked for grammatical accuracy e.g "...Rio, because wouldn't IT be nice..."

And please "..the woman I loved more than cheeseburgers... " So you loved this woman more than the meat of a dead poor defenceless animal that never did anyone any harm !

The crown is slipping.
on KAT 2 by nentwined 29 Aug 2002, 10:49 AM
nice I like it - 9/10
on some deleted poem 26 Aug 2002, 1:38 AM
Nice treatment of a subject much covered-keeping it in the family worth at least an 8/10
on I Am The Judge by gianni 26 Aug 2002, 1:47 AM
I don't want to fall out with you as I made you-I am the judge and it brings heavt responsibilities-nice poem though 8/10
on some deleted poem 11 Sep 2002, 9:52 AM
You and me girl, we gave it a twirl. Pole is like spaghetti now, nope there it goes again. What can I say lets play