on Our Soldiers by Lenore
6 Jul 2005, 8:22 AM
Actually, I think this isn't bad. Don't like the last line, but whatever.
on Promise Me by Taco
6 Jul 2005, 8:19 AM
bleeech.
on Born and Fed by Dovina
6 Jul 2005, 8:17 AM
Quite frankly, it's just boring.
on Because to Live I Must by TLRufener
6 Jul 2005, 8:14 AM
A trip to Salem, you must take.
on I Need Not be Told by Chelsio
6 Jul 2005, 8:13 AM
better than your other one, I'll give you that.
on Close to my Heart by Chelsio
6 Jul 2005, 8:12 AM
Ok, this is not great, but for 13 years old I'll say it's not bad.
on My Little Africa (edit) by Nuit
5 Jul 2005, 8:49 AM
I love how you left the misspelling in to illustrate the lack of education in Africa. That's great.
on Eternal Pain by lil_evil_boi
22 Jun 2005, 8:52 AM
Assignment: Read this to whoever it's for. If you get all the way through it without them A) Shooting themselves or B) shooting you, I'll give you a 10.
on Beach Volleyball by lil_evil_boi
14 Jun 2005, 10:52 AM
If you're any older that 7 or 8, this is terrible.
on Books by sacred_poet_me
14 Jun 2005, 10:49 AM
This has been said much better on those posters at the local library that say "Reading Is Super".
on Mr. Campbell's final journey by jroday
14 Jun 2005, 10:45 AM
feet are bare, not bear....unless maybe they're really hairy, in which case you might try something like Hobbit feet.
So, this guy did something bad enough to get the chair for it and he's going to heaven...I'll never understand Christianity..you get to do whatever you want to do, and as long as you say you're sorry, you still get to go to heaven. YAHOO
So, this guy did something bad enough to get the chair for it and he's going to heaven...I'll never understand Christianity..you get to do whatever you want to do, and as long as you say you're sorry, you still get to go to heaven. YAHOO
on I want you by nicole081083
13 Jun 2005, 6:57 AM
Write this from the point of view of a Rwandan refugee and you've got something.
on Perfect place by gothiclovepoetiss
13 Jun 2005, 6:55 AM
Not very goth...try rewriting it with different words..and a different theme...and change the title...that would make it better in my opinion.
replying on -750,000 in Rwanda by ALChemy
13 Jun 2005, 6:44 AM
Are you SURE it's all true? Were you there?
replying on MTV's The Real World: Allpoetry.com by Bluemonkey
25 May 2005, 8:33 AM
I apologize, my friend, but Nentwined has yet to put a category on the Poemranker called Bluemonkey's Haiku...the moment the does I'll change it, I assure you.
replying on MTV's The Real World: Poemranker by Bluemonkey
24 May 2005, 11:17 AM
do what?
on Ungrateful by Damien_
24 May 2005, 10:45 AM
"I am Ungrateful,
Ungratefully....
That's simply fucking awful, man.
Ungratefully....
That's simply fucking awful, man.