on Yield by wilco
12 Oct 2005, 6:27 AM
Better than anything you've written in a long while.
replying on Al-Qaida Blues by Bluemonkey
12 Jul 2005, 6:39 AM
That would be not a good idea.
replying on Al-Qaida Blues by Bluemonkey
11 Jul 2005, 11:52 AM
Oh...no that's not what I was talking about but i guess I can see why you'd get that.
replying on Al-Qaida Blues by Bluemonkey
11 Jul 2005, 11:50 AM
and why would I capitalize 'you'?
replying on Al-Qaida Blues by Bluemonkey
11 Jul 2005, 11:50 AM
What who feels?
on When my place is placeless by Prince of Void
11 Jul 2005, 11:44 AM
Good God, man.
on Flies in the ointment. by darby pyn
11 Jul 2005, 11:43 AM
I'm confused as hell on this one.
on Slice Open My Body by TLRufener
11 Jul 2005, 11:39 AM
boo. You can and have done better.
on JUST A FEW by rbooey
11 Jul 2005, 11:37 AM
Please refer to my reply to your comment on the suggestions page for my reason for giving this a 0.
on A World At War by Damien
11 Jul 2005, 11:32 AM
If you're going to write about something like this...and be as graphic as you have, for God sakes, man, don't rhyme.
on Almost Persuaded by Dovina
11 Jul 2005, 11:28 AM
Good rhymes. Not wild about the poem itself, but I'll give you a 6 for that.
replying on JUST A FEW by rbooey
11 Jul 2005, 6:28 AM
Actually, i noticed too...and to be honest with you, it's quite annoying.
replying on My Little Africa (edit) by Nuit
7 Jul 2005, 10:28 AM
I was being sarcastic, you dimwit.
on Crying Tears with No Home by TLRufener
7 Jul 2005, 9:30 AM
Not terrible but the grammtical and spelling mistakes are very noticeable. If you're going to write a poem in honor of your friend, you should at least take the ime to proofread it.
replying on The Bastardization of Hypocrisy by Bluemonkey
6 Jul 2005, 9:06 AM
Hmmm...perhaps if I added some barnyard animals you would understand.
on Crack baby by Caducus
6 Jul 2005, 8:30 AM
Ahh, drugs. super. Ever seen a crack baby? ghastly.
on Mother Earth by TLRufener
6 Jul 2005, 8:26 AM
Lose everything but this:
Mother Earth
Has gone to sleep.
Lamenting, the wind
Wails and weeps.
Mother Earth
Has gone to sleep.
Lamenting, the wind
Wails and weeps.