on crossroad by calilegzzz
30 Jan 2005, 3:58 PM
it will get better tomorrow..... (or in the future; for sure)
-megan
-megan
on some deleted poem
23 Feb 2005, 7:05 PM
i cannot believe this poem is currently ranked first, not only is it very cliche, but the rhyming is not very well done
on The drug prayer by Nitroxide
5 Mar 2005, 11:25 AM
i like it but it is just a bit long
on for sue (20030815) by nentwined
5 Mar 2005, 11:28 AM
i love this
it doesnt make much sense to me
but the sound of it makes it wonderful anyway
- 10 -
it doesnt make much sense to me
but the sound of it makes it wonderful anyway
- 10 -
on The Escape by Geschäftsreise
5 Mar 2005, 11:41 AM
um why dont you write a story not a poem, because this comes across as very unskilled and choppy
but you might to nicely if you make it into a short story
but you might to nicely if you make it into a short story
on one moment to the other by nentwined
5 Mar 2005, 11:44 AM
i like this alot
-9-
your word choice was very nice
-9-
your word choice was very nice
on Thundershowers and my best friend by NeeMan
7 Mar 2005, 5:53 PM
i absolutely love this 100%! - 10 -
-megan
-megan
on Doesn't Take Much by Plaidypus
7 Mar 2005, 3:53 PM
absolutely excellent
- 10 -
-megan
- 10 -
-megan
on For China by Fear of Garbage
7 Mar 2005, 5:32 PM
intersting - i dont really get it though -
megan
megan
on A Sonnet for Barbara by PatColvin
7 Mar 2005, 5:46 PM
it is nice as a poem for your wife, but noone else, its rhymes are unimaginative and weak, and it doesnt have a lot of appeal -- sonnets are ahrd though so ill give you a 5 for effort -
i like this - but i must say i disagree
the answers are never in any one else but yourself, and if you are not finding them then you may not be ready to know -
but i don't think, even though we would all like to believe otherwise, that the answers can be found in any other person
-megan
the answers are never in any one else but yourself, and if you are not finding them then you may not be ready to know -
but i don't think, even though we would all like to believe otherwise, that the answers can be found in any other person
-megan
on Harvester of Sorrow by frdup717
10 Mar 2005, 1:14 PM
nice - i like this alot -
-megan
-megan
on Resurrection by Dreammaker1024
10 Mar 2005, 1:22 PM
i like this but it is a bit too much all at once
i think that the concrete block of words may make people less likely to read it - perhaps if you broke if up into verses or stanzas
regardless it was good -
megan
i think that the concrete block of words may make people less likely to read it - perhaps if you broke if up into verses or stanzas
regardless it was good -
megan
on The Artist by Dreammaker1024
10 Mar 2005, 1:28 PM
i really really like this you tell it well
-megan
p.s. - you are here because you obviously like to wright poetry - so i ask you this
why not put her name in the books and the learned memory of those around the world?
-megan
p.s. - you are here because you obviously like to wright poetry - so i ask you this
why not put her name in the books and the learned memory of those around the world?
i like this - it actually reminds me of something i wrote - in fact the theme is very similar
(perhaps great minds think alike?) :)
you could make it a little bit better if you sharped some of the edges and played with your word choice, but it is overall very nicely done - 9 -
-megan
(perhaps great minds think alike?) :)
you could make it a little bit better if you sharped some of the edges and played with your word choice, but it is overall very nicely done - 9 -
-megan
-mega