on Isolate by Beseech
31 Mar 2003, 1:17 PM
Beseech don't listen to wink minded people like 'lark angel' just feel sorry for them since they have nothing better to do then to TRY and pray on people. I honestly Like this 9 :)
on Wearing Black, as Memory Dictates by UnityMitford
5 Nov 2002, 7:01 AM
Deep. I can't say I understand this poem fully, but I do like it very much so! =)
on The dance as old as time by wEdible Underpantsw
28 Mar 2003, 4:48 AM
I agree with Stephen...filth
on ~For Katie on her Birthday by Misha Sanz
30 May 2003, 1:34 PM
Aww!! Isn't Misha such a sweetie *kisses* Thanks Hunniz
on Morman On A Bike by Blindproject217
3 Apr 2003, 8:39 AM
*giggles* Interesting. Yet I like the flow of it, and all, So I give it a -10- ;) Granted I dunno what a mormon is but yeah... :-\ blonde moment! lol, just messing :P Good Poem Blind =)
on if tommorow never comes by junkyarddog13
2 Apr 2003, 12:57 PM
Welcome to poemranker junkyarddog! =) I like what you have done here there are some parts that can be cleaned up, and revised, but ann in all I gave it a 7 =)
on some deleted poem
10 Feb 2003, 3:44 PM
:'( Beautiful...I truley love it, 10. If I may ask this is from experence?
on MY LOVE FOR YOU by Normo
31 Jan 2003, 8:26 PM
Short, and Sweet. I must admit I love it! an 8 for you! But I think I would like to see it made a little longer, just a thought, =)
on A little by The Eskimo King
11 Nov 2002, 10:17 AM
Shouldn't it be "A little bit of something, each and every day, will help sooth the pains, of items on e-bay" ( you left out the of )and um...this is just something you threw together wasn't it...It ryhemes yes, but it's not...poetic, lol.
on ... by logun2002ya
28 Oct 2002, 10:46 AM
hm...logun...I like...it's slow yet easy...but I like it...simple yet interesting...9 for ya ^._.^
on TONIGHT by adrenalize
30 Oct 2002, 6:24 PM
I think the first stanza would sound better like this: Tonight the rain is falling
But Iv run out of tears
Because crying in the rain
Never makes the pain disappear, it's just a thought, and I think maybe if you go through this poem one more time, and try to clean it up some, it would be a beautiful poem! But other than that, I must say I like it =)
But Iv run out of tears
Because crying in the rain
Never makes the pain disappear, it's just a thought, and I think maybe if you go through this poem one more time, and try to clean it up some, it would be a beautiful poem! But other than that, I must say I like it =)
on some deleted poem
15 Oct 2002, 3:08 PM
ugg, don't listen to the ass whloes on this site, you ahve no clue what there blabbing about. I like abgels so they all can come kiss my as spersonally if they got something aginst them. Good poem =)
on A Little Life by Tom Colebrooke
14 Oct 2002, 8:36 AM
Interesting point of view tom...interesting...lol...hehe But I like bumblebees, hehe so I give yeah a 10 =) hehe go bumblebees!!
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God, won't you guy's please stop bickering...if you haven't noticed the point of this site is to post your poems, and help other peolpe fix theres. Blade, don't listen to some of the asses on this site, It's a nice poem, yes it does need some touchs up, but other than that I like it. I give it a ~*5*~ =)
on Wanna Be Porn Star. by spank me baby yeah
2 Apr 2003, 1:03 PM
(cough) uh huh.. =\ *cough* waco *cough*
on i need a title by That One
23 Aug 2005, 11:56 AM
Aren't Sonnets suppose to have 10 syllables in each line?!
on some deleted poem
23 Aug 2005, 11:59 AM
thank god someone wrote a Sonnet using proper form!
on Loose Leaf by Miggy
19 Sep 2007, 11:14 PM
hey miggy, I bet you don't remember me but you gave me a little help with one of my poems a very long time ago, lol :) Glad to see your still writing! =) Anyways, I love the feeling your trying to express here, but when writing a lyric try making a little beat in your mind and singing it. This way you can make sure everything flows together and your not going to run out of breath trying to get everything in. But over-all I enjoyed your imagery.
-Katie
-Katie