on The Happy Side of Misery by Dovina
22 May 2007, 9:54 AM
You over chisel your poems as much as Rockmage under chisels his rocks. I would suggest you pad you quatrains for aesthetics and imagery sake. Maybe make them all 6 lines each. Nothing wrong with indulging in superfluous language.
replying on A twisted Trail in Edenâs Garden by Dovina
18 May 2007, 5:18 PM
Sorry hun, flower girl position has already been taken but the bride has been instucted to aim for you with the bouquet. Till then remember a rose as radiant as you needs no accompaniment of other flowers.
on A twisted Trail in Edenâs Garden by Dovina
18 May 2007, 10:35 AM
Very lyrical. Nice to see that from you.
One must remember it took the devil himself to seduce Eve but it only took a woman to seduce Adam.
One must remember it took the devil himself to seduce Eve but it only took a woman to seduce Adam.
on Bookshop girls by Stephen Robins
18 May 2007, 9:31 AM
The entire cast of Monty Python farts in your general direction.
on My Soul Cries Out by amanda_dcosta
18 May 2007, 9:28 AM
I love how you admit to god feelings many would feel uncomfortable speaking about to god. "erase those emotions that cause me to be disappointed in you" for instance. More prayer than poem but a very good prayer.
on Les Imagistes by Nicholas Jones
18 Feb 2007, 8:08 AM
I would bet my right arm that no duck that has ever existed aside from maybe Donald, Daffy or Howard the duck has ever contemplated in any way the profundity of walking on water.
on You by amanda_dcosta
8 Feb 2007, 6:06 AM
Some of the best half rhyme I've read here.
on She dreams by amanda_dcosta
8 Feb 2007, 5:57 AM
One of the best poems I've read here. He's a very lucky man.
replying on The Perigenetic Prayer by ALChemy
31 Oct 2006, 7:48 AM
Thing is I'm by no means anti-English. I'm anti anti-American English twit. A title of which Ol' Edna fits perfectly into.
replying on The Perigenetic Prayer by ALChemy
31 Oct 2006, 7:30 AM
You say it like Oliva' Twist, like you 'unger for it."Can I have some mo' Please?"- Bon apitit bitch.
replying on The Perigenetic Prayer by ALChemy
31 Oct 2006, 6:24 AM
What's the use of having perfect grammar if you're still just a vulgar hag despite it? Tell me that, Gov'na or me-lady or whatever you are.
replying on Rare Oul' Times in the County Wicklow by Edna Sweetlove
31 Oct 2006, 5:09 AM
You seem to be so upset over a little neglection of spelling. Nah, I just got to you that's all. It was so easy too.
on The Pitâs Bottom by Dovina
29 Oct 2006, 6:38 AM
The Tao of Dovina.
replying on The world's shortest poem by ALChemy
29 Oct 2006, 6:23 AM
NEWSFLASH: Nobody uses "WRONGLY" at the end of a verb anymore except very old English people. ("WRONGLY spelled" would have been fine.)
on Rare Oul' Times in the County Wicklow by Edna Sweetlove
29 Oct 2006, 6:01 AM
Actually it's England that's on the wrong side of the street. We had cars first. Anything to prove your not our 51st state.
replying on The world's shortest poem by ALChemy
29 Oct 2006, 5:48 AM
...which is the entire point of the poem genius.
replying on Vote Goats by ALChemy
29 Oct 2006, 5:46 AM
Fair enough but I could have sworn you were one of those anonymous voting types not so long ago.
on Prayer by amanda_dcosta
15 Sep 2006, 7:34 PM
Beautiful
-from Richard Hall's Sniglets: Words that don't appear in the dictionary, but should.