on All in Love by gothiclovepoetiss
18 Jun 2005, 11:05 PM
sometimes feelings lie
on some deleted poem
18 Jun 2005, 11:07 PM
I remember the swap meet over on Slawson.
on It Could Be Worse by smiffy84
18 Jun 2005, 5:03 PM
Blair Witched?
on grin and stand by celticskatermatt1
19 Jun 2005, 5:46 PM
spell check.
on Fatherâs Day by Dovina
19 Jun 2005, 7:17 PM
I disagree with your premise. I am sorry you aren't aware of many old men that don't fit this stereotype.
I'll try not to write about a woman's relationship with her mother to avoid the same trap.
I'll try not to write about a woman's relationship with her mother to avoid the same trap.
on Being Alone by Sunshine Conkey
19 Jun 2005, 7:33 PM
I was trying to figure out the rhyme scheme. I see in the first two stanzas you rhyme lines 2 and 4. Then a five line 5th stanza with a rhyme in lines 3 and 4.
was this the plan?
was this the plan?
on Naughty Poems (R) by untamed_fierce
19 Jun 2005, 7:41 PM
http://www.lotsofjokes.com/cat_312.htm
They Are plagiarized. Here is a sight with all of the above located on the same page.
They Are plagiarized. Here is a sight with all of the above located on the same page.
on some deleted poem
20 Jun 2005, 7:19 PM
something wicked this way comes...
on Treblinka Re-opened by Caducus
20 Jun 2005, 7:20 PM
why blame God?
on Rise (incomplete) by Miracle
20 Jun 2005, 10:57 PM
and maybe the Texas sun can call you west, and the moon from Houston can call you home.
on some deleted poem
21 Jun 2005, 3:08 PM
it's lyrical.. I think.
'steal my lone" ?
lone=adj. Without accompaniment,Without companionship, Being the only one; sole, Situated by itself.
Steal my being the only one.
Steal my without companionship
Steal my situated by itself.
'steal my lone" ?
lone=adj. Without accompaniment,Without companionship, Being the only one; sole, Situated by itself.
Steal my being the only one.
Steal my without companionship
Steal my situated by itself.
on After A Love is Lost by pinay_miss_azn
22 Jun 2005, 12:29 AM
a scar can not by definition be invisible. Or it isn't a scar. it's unmarred flesh. What makes a scar a scar is the Marring.
all that to wonder out loud; is English your first language?
all that to wonder out loud; is English your first language?
on Sandia Plain by Dovina
22 Jun 2005, 12:37 AM
are you talking about the Sandia near the Rio Grande?
What you have written makes me wonder about the author and not about the poem itself. Does that make it art? I don't know. I'm trying to figure out your motivation without knowing you. This is a lot of NOT thinking about the above words.
What you have written makes me wonder about the author and not about the poem itself. Does that make it art? I don't know. I'm trying to figure out your motivation without knowing you. This is a lot of NOT thinking about the above words.
on Mountain Gorillas by Blue Magpie
22 Jun 2005, 12:42 AM
you think the gorillas think about our inner struggle as higher primates? you think the gorillas see their imminent extinction and wonder about the cause of it?
I disagree with your heart, but I don't dislike your sonnet.
I disagree with your heart, but I don't dislike your sonnet.
on some deleted poem
22 Jun 2005, 10:51 AM
velvet ropes guiding to the gift shop, poster-prints waiting for the voracious consumer.
I had to use the dictionary twice, but that's okay.
I had to use the dictionary twice, but that's okay.
on Third person. by darby pyn
23 Jun 2005, 2:17 AM
I mean no offense when I tell you that the first sentence to come into my mind when I read this was, "What in The Hell?"
I'm gonna go to bed and read this again in the morning. See what shakes off the tree then.
I'm gonna go to bed and read this again in the morning. See what shakes off the tree then.