on some deleted poem
28 Jul 2005, 10:18 PM
God damnit, that's good humor.
on some deleted poem
28 Jul 2005, 10:23 PM
I went to Indio, Ca. and camped out, so perhaps the imagery was too easy/wonderful for me...but I dont care. This was bad ass!
on some deleted poem
29 Jul 2005, 10:29 AM
If this truely is a lyric to a song, please stop making lyrics that are so specific and boring. This reminds me of some Dave Matthews/John Mayer/Jack Johnson/new-age "punk" crap that makes me want to vomit. I'm not saying you shouldnt write about this very subject, but try and paint a picture rather than draw a diagram...if you can follow that.
on Death On Arrival by Miggy
29 Jul 2005, 10:33 AM
Pretty good, but nothing special. I like the chorus.
Boooooooooooooooooooriiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii
on I want to slit my wrist and call it poetry by thepinkbunnyofdoom
29 Jul 2005, 10:58 AM
I must say I enjoyed this read. I gave you an 8, because nobody else had.
on some deleted poem
31 Jul 2005, 9:22 AM
nice porn piece, it would get a 10 with pictures!
on Little Orange Petal Flower by i_am_the_popsicle
18 Aug 2005, 1:55 AM
It reminds me of the seasonal-depression I expierience. The winter is horrible. The summer is awesome. You're poem is alright.
on I Love You (song) by TLRufener
9 Sep 2005, 8:05 AM
Quit ripping off of the Backstreet Boy's material...I mean, I don't blame you-they rock, but it's just not right. I wouldn't write anymore songs if I were you, there's already too much of this boring shit already.
on some deleted poem
20 Sep 2005, 11:06 PM
This is fucking amazing...I really want to give it a 10, but I cannot give any poem a 10...that would say it is perfect, and that is most impossible. However, you kiss perfection...maybe even slip it the tounge; a very dark, vivid tounge. god damnit this is some good fucking shit...I cant fucking stop swearing its so good. I'm putting in a 9, but I want you to know it is more like 9.95. This is by far the best thing I have read on this site.
on Last Call by thepinkbunnyofdoom
17 Jan 2006, 6:18 PM
I feel like I can relate to this one, I like it a lot.
on Cold-Blooded Pillow by drnick
19 Jan 2006, 9:22 PM
This was called "Sleeping with the Enemy," however due to recent complaints I found that this was also the title to some piece of shit movie and thus could not use it. After hours upon hours of Trial and Error(also the title to a movie) I came up with this, I hope you like it.
on When God is Needed No More by ALChemy
23 Jan 2006, 6:28 PM
Pretty good...I agree with the not needing god part, mostly because "he" does absolutely nothing. It would be better if you didn't believe, and made this something about how we wont need religion when we can all live peacefully without it. Perhaps I will do something like that. Anywho, not bad...