on Last Call by thepinkbunnyofdoom
17 Jan 2006, 6:18 PM
I feel like I can relate to this one, I like it a lot.
on I Love You (song) by TLRufener
9 Sep 2005, 8:05 AM
Quit ripping off of the Backstreet Boy's material...I mean, I don't blame you-they rock, but it's just not right. I wouldn't write anymore songs if I were you, there's already too much of this boring shit already.
replying on ANALYZE THIS by drnick
7 Sep 2005, 11:15 PM
It is, just in a language yet to be created.
on Little Orange Petal Flower by i_am_the_popsicle
18 Aug 2005, 1:55 AM
It reminds me of the seasonal-depression I expierience. The winter is horrible. The summer is awesome. You're poem is alright.
You know what would be awesome? If you could be technical and completely RUIN EVERYTHING...you're completely right, not choosing is a choice...I meant it to be more like, "why have the choice if you always choose to do nothing and waste away into oblivion?" However, I don't think that rhymes. I put up a new poem for you to hate so enjoy ripping that one apart too.
replying on The Worst Poem Ever Created (edited) by drnick
31 Jul 2005, 9:04 AM
The whole nature of this poem is to invoke confusion at all times, even when rating. Is it sad that I can't write the worst poem ever even when I try? I think so.
replying on This Just In... by drnick
31 Jul 2005, 8:55 AM
Ya, I noticed the lack of a comma after I posted it. I was trying to point out how the news delivers us only what they want us to see, which is usually nothing to be happy about. To me, it seems as though they are trying to make the world seem worse than it really is. Maybe you've never seen the news.
on I want to slit my wrist and call it poetry by thepinkbunnyofdoom
29 Jul 2005, 10:58 AM
I must say I enjoyed this read. I gave you an 8, because nobody else had.
Boooooooooooooooooooriiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii iiiing, if you haven't noticed...the whole love-theme you've got going on here may be popular but it sucks. The lyrics are way too specific. This is the type of song girls in High School sing a long to. Try taking some drugs and write about that.
on Death On Arrival by Miggy
29 Jul 2005, 10:33 AM
Pretty good, but nothing special. I like the chorus.
replying on The Worst Poem Ever Created (edited) by drnick
29 Jul 2005, 10:09 AM
You're right, the last part does ruin it, especially the last line. Thank you.