poemranker ::20 most recent comments by drnick

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on F Log-On by Skamper 19 Jun 2007, 7:55 AM
Very funny...not that I can relate or anything.
on Between two Truths by Dovina 16 Jun 2007, 12:34 PM
Well call me crazy, but I do like the fourth line; it's a good comparison because much like the colors of cars, the kind of church is a preference of what is basically all the same thing. Very nice!
on Bonded by Skamper 17 Jun 2007, 6:59 PM
Dark and erotic, like your mother.
on Beslan by Ranger 8 Jun 2007, 1:22 PM
Flawless with an outsanding closing line. If you like that sort of thing. ;)
on A twisted Trail in Eden’s Garden by Dovina 29 Mar 2007, 3:17 PM
Very dark! I like it!
on The Pit’s Bottom by Dovina 27 Oct 2006, 8:52 AM
I'm not sure I deserved a response such as this, but thank you. This is very good, however im not completely sure of the over-all message you're trying to convey here. And evil is not a mystery, evil is me. I am evil, I am the DEVIL (woogy-boogy).
on Bitter by Ranger 12 Jan 2007, 12:51 PM
dude, how have you been? do you still exist?!
on Fanatic by Dovina 12 Jan 2007, 12:53 PM
nice to know you're still writing about me ;)

in all seriousness, very nice...how have you been?
on The Medium of Dunce by Ranger 17 Feb 2007, 9:23 AM
What is this shit? Just kidding. I like the repeated lines.
on Remembering Nick by jessicazee 21 Feb 2007, 10:26 PM
nobody named nick is worth remembering
on Llamas by Skamper 29 Mar 2007, 3:21 PM
I'm not sure what is going on here, but I like that it's not obvious. I got the feeling of a mind furious with anxious thought, which seemed to work out well. Nice rhythem, as well.
on Cane by richa 29 Mar 2007, 3:23 PM
Hahahaha, heaven-that's funny. But seriously, I like what you've done here although I can't say I get anything from reading this. However that is probably because I am stupid. Yay.
on some deleted poem 13 Mar 2007, 11:05 PM
Nice, I can't say that I feel a strong connection to the situation, however I can see that you're not looking for something specific for the reader to relate to, it’s the outlook on life you want people to relate to; and I can see where you're coming from. You have a nice voice in this, very frank.
on The Editor by Dovina 30 Apr 2007, 3:01 PM
I didn't like the comparison in line 6, but after seeing how you developed it I changed my mind. This is very well written, but I'm not sure what you mean by "My tone is altered by such poems." How is your tone altered, and why? It just doesn't seem to fit right there. Anyways, great job!
on Benevolent Oasis by drnick 24 Apr 2007, 10:32 AM
I met a girl. I think I'm in love.
on husk [hai-crete] by lmp 21 Jun 2007, 1:54 PM
I usually hate this type of poem, but you did an excellent job!
on Better Things by EAger to Offend 21 Jun 2007, 1:58 PM
Wouldn't this be considered a prose? Either way, pretty good stuff.
on Alcohol by tisa7 21 Jun 2007, 10:40 PM
Awesome, I'll print this out and bring it with me to the bathroom in the morning. You know the cure for a hangover is smoking weed.
on The Dark Poet by Dovina 26 Aug 2007, 8:55 PM
It is those who are in darkness that see light most clearly.
on some deleted poem 31 Aug 2007, 9:01 PM
Wow, I remember this...kind-of. This is what you get at about 4 in the morning stoned and drunk: a total whitman rip-off. Nevertheless, I think it's a sharp-witted social critique of modern relationships and how I should have nothing to do with them. This poem is ahead of its time; its time being the end of time. Groundbreaking.