on kiss by elizabethann
17 Mar 2003, 6:38 AM
The boy who told you you almost gave him an orgasm by kissing his neck was lying, and you are a fool for believing him.
on Why I Chose My Name by mmejido
13 Mar 2003, 8:38 PM
NOBODY CARES.
on The day Pan out-played Apollo by Bachus
13 Mar 2003, 8:41 PM
I'M SURE THIS MEANS SOMETHING.
on hard as a rock by <~>
13 Mar 2003, 8:39 PM
HARD AS A SOCK
on some deleted poem
17 Mar 2003, 6:50 AM
I could go through this and tell you point by point why this is awful. Do you want that? DO YOU WANT TO MAKE TROUBLE? BECAUSE I'LL PEEL YOU A TROUBLE SPUD IF YOU WANT IT
on What Do You Want From Me? by Bonehiss
15 Mar 2003, 2:10 AM
I was going to leave a sarcastic comment about the gibbon simile, but I've "altered my consciousness" and it seems really scary.
on some deleted poem
14 Mar 2003, 12:02 PM
Reminded me of http://www.poemranker.com/poem-details.j
WOW LOL STREAM OF CONSCIOUSNESS YOU REALLY BARE YOUR HEART AND JUST LET YOUR EMOTIONS FALL OUT I MEAN SO MANY PEOPLE COULD LEARN FROM YOUR EXAMPLE THIS IS A BEAUTIFUL PIECE AND IT MAKES ME CRY WITH HAPPINESS ABOUT HOW THE WORLD IS SO GREAT AND YOU JUST SAY THINGS IN SUCH A BEAUTIFUL, SIMPLE WAY YOU DON'T BEAT AROUND THE BUSH OR TRY TO MAKE THINGS MORE THAN THEY ARE YOU JUST TELL IT LIKE IT IS BUT THAT'S OK BECAUSE EVERYTHING HAS A TRUE INNER BEAUTY THAT FAR OUTSHINES THE FALSE BEAUTY CREATED BY INSINCERE POETS AND THEIR WEAVING OF WORDS YOU HAVE CREATED A REVOULTION IN POETRY AND MY HEART IS FOREVER YOURS
on At Least I Love You by Luv2write
13 Mar 2003, 8:37 PM
Beautiful. Simply beautiful. You have stolen my heart away with your pure, simple words. Who needs fancifications like "writing in a style that isn't identical to prose but with random line breaks" or "non-default choice of words" or "a basic understanding of poetry"?! Obviously not you! You are so special that you have an innate mastery of the essence of poetry without even needing to read any other poems! You're so amazing that the last three thousand years of poetry is rendered irrelevent by your challenging, breakthrough work!
LOOK YOU STUPID BINT: YOU ARE A STUPID BINT.
LOOK YOU STUPID BINT: YOU ARE A STUPID BINT.
on Tears For You by mckenzie
13 Mar 2003, 8:40 PM
REALLY? THAT'S GREAT NEWS! YEP. EXCELLENT! OK. OK. YEP. CHEERS. SEE YOU AT SEVEN THEN. OK. LOVE YOU. BYE!
on Maud, After the Death of her Daughter Lynn by middenHeap
13 Mar 2003, 8:42 PM
ACES ANOTHER LOVE POEM! WELL GOLLY FUCKING GOSH I HAVEN'T SEEN ONE OF THOSE IN A WHILE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
on some deleted poem
13 Mar 2003, 8:43 PM
I AM THE ONE THAT KILLED YOUR DAD
I AM THE EARLY MORNING KIT KAT
SEVENTY FOUR
SEVENTY FIVE
I AM THE EARLY MORNING KIT KAT
SEVENTY FOUR
SEVENTY FIVE
BEFORE YOU CONSIDER WRITING POETRY, TRY MASTERING THE ABILITY TO MASTER THE ABILITY TO WRITE COHERENT SENTENCES IN PLAIN ENGLISH. BECAUSE IF WE CAN'T EVEN DO THAT RIGHT, HOW CAN WE POSSIBLY HOPE TO TACKLE THE PROBLEM OF INFLATION? HOW CAN WE SOLVE EDUCATION? AND HOW CAN WE EVEN BEGIN TO DEAL WITH THE "COULDN'T CARE LESS" ATTITUDE THAT IS SO DEEPLY ROOTED IN THE FABRIC OF MODERN SOCIETY? I DON'T PRETEND TO HAVE ALL THE ANSWERS. I DON'T EVEN PRETEND TO WEAR UNDERPANTS.
DO YOU?
DO YOU?
on Orders to My Zombie Legions by razorgrin
13 Mar 2003, 8:28 PM
wait, are the grateful dead the zombies or the hippies?
on Assassin Nation by Blue Magpie
13 Mar 2003, 10:36 AM
Zoran Djindjic - such a poetic name.
on sexy by elizabethann
13 Mar 2003, 10:47 AM
I like your use of the words "really sexy" to make the poeme seem really sexy. Also, great job throwing "scarred arms" in there. Poetry is always so much more profound when scars are involved. It's just that they're so deep, and so beautiful. Yes. You heard me. I said "beautiful". Because my scars ARE beautiful. They say more about me than Eminem ever could.
on A Tale of Peter Pan by NewbieMe
12 Mar 2003, 12:59 AM
There once was some aids in a Newbie,
Who suckled it out of a Doobie.
In terror he cried,
"Oh no! I shall die!
And I've never seen any Boobies!"
Who suckled it out of a Doobie.
In terror he cried,
"Oh no! I shall die!
And I've never seen any Boobies!"
on some deleted poem
12 Mar 2003, 3:13 AM
harvest this
on Lover's Portrait by Dancer
17 Mar 2003, 6:42 AM
It's 'it's'.
It's 'Jesu'.
It's a pile of toss.
It's 'Jesu'.
It's a pile of toss.