on some deleted poem
4 Sep 2002, 4:05 PM
Moreover, it IS "poeme". Any knave who says otherwise is no true follower of Jesu.
on some deleted poem
4 Sep 2002, 7:54 PM
god'swife, you are an old woman who is on the internet. Have a prize!
on some deleted poem
4 Sep 2002, 7:55 PM
p.s. It is you who is the one who spellted God's name wrong in the first place. Good day.
on some deleted poem
4 Sep 2002, 8:26 PM
P.P.S. All that bother about defending truth and justice is twice as ridiculous in Latin. I mean, come on. Think of some more interesting concepts to defend. Older in breath than in deed. A flood of opinions. Clinging to a skirt. Open diary. friendshipmaker. Feeling good about a job well done. Learning something new every day. The pause in a conversation in which one considers oneself as a meta-entity, not fully realising that the other person is doing the same. Pyjamas. Slicing. Planning your emotional development down to the last detail. Looking for a satisfying pattern in your life. Constantly being aware of only half living up to what you knew you would be because you're special and you read that book that one time, but allowing nothing but supreme confidence in your own value system to shine through. Billowing. Striding. Bustling. Chatting. Sipping. Good day.
on Narrow Minded People by 4eyes
4 Sep 2002, 8:36 PM
Looking back angrily on someone disapproving of you and obsessing over it to the point where you diagnose them with an imaginary mental disorder is to "only see what was and not what is to be". I think you don't understand a lot of people yourself. Tell me this: Have any of the people you admired ever sat down and written a sniffly, indignant poem about mean people? By the way, spurning someone is the quickest way to get a free psychological assessment.
on Horatio by april fool
4 Sep 2002, 8:37 PM
Genius, even without the last line.
on Coat hanger by april fool
4 Sep 2002, 8:39 PM
Personified furniture is the best thing ever. I have written a series of short, incomprehensible tales about a magical hat and shoe who live in an enchanted wardrobe and then meaninglessly attack people. I will keep them to myself, I think.
on Oh Well by RWAndersen
4 Sep 2002, 8:39 PM
THIS IS GREAT KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK
on I thought we were meant to be by trev086
4 Sep 2002, 8:41 PM
When I read this poeme, I wanted to clap. But instead I tugged into a bap. And while you may avert your eyes, you'll not taste finer than my Bap Surprise.
on the truth about poets by New Life Drug
4 Sep 2002, 8:44 PM
Will you duel, or are you a coward?
on some deleted poem
5 Sep 2002, 2:04 AM
Yeah beakism! Stop trying to force us to play by your rules! Why do you feel you have to cage our beautiful imaginations? The Sky is the Limit!
on some deleted poem
5 Sep 2002, 7:21 AM
Oh, I see! You believe that you're toying with me! Now it all makes sense. Though all your moves come straight from the book, that's OK; I haven't had a good recital in a while. Please continue.
on some deleted poem
5 Sep 2002, 7:25 AM
PAKI: I know me telling you this is going to fit into your grand scheme of things, but you've missed the point. The point isn't that it's bad to jabber on; it's that even when the task for which jabbering was necessary is complete, the jabbering continues. god'swife: no, it's "I". It refers to a habit, not a prediction.
on some deleted poem
5 Sep 2002, 7:34 AM
PAKI: What is your obsession with people being in cliques? I have never said anything like "nobody on this site can write for shit". If you read any of my comments about "good" poetry, you will see that I "praise" the pieces that I think are good. I have said that specific people cannot write for shit. You have also said such things. So what exactly is your problem? Instead of just vaguely insinuating that I'm a naughty boy, why not just come out with it and frankly share your anger with the world? (Don't tell me you still think I'm beakism?)
on some deleted poem
5 Sep 2002, 9:29 AM
I want to know what your problem is with me. Not with beakism. I am not beakism (just in case you were wondering. Ask nentwined to look at the IP logs if you're so sure of yourself). For a while now you've replied to a good proportion of my comments with your current theory of -=Dark_Angel=-. Clearly you do have a problem, or you wouldn't spend so much time psychoanalysing me. So what is it?
on some deleted poem
5 Sep 2002, 9:35 AM
This poeme is stiflingly beige.
on some deleted poem
5 Sep 2002, 10:17 AM
My point was nothing to do with the spelling of "saviour". My point was that you did NOT capitalise the 'h' in "he". As any true follower of Jesu knows, it is blasphemy to refer to the almighty as 'he' rather than 'He'.
on some deleted poem
5 Sep 2002, 12:57 PM
I think the issue here is that we all hold true to our emotions, be they old fashioned or otherwise. Life is an adventure, guys! Let's open our hearts and live it to the full!
on some deleted poem
5 Sep 2002, 1:03 PM
PAKI: what's your problem with the chat system? Just click on the chat button. Type in a nickname and press enter.
on some deleted poem
5 Sep 2002, 1:30 PM
Hey guys! Why don't we continue this fascinating discussion in the chat room!? Great!