on End of day poem by ecargo
9 Sep 2006, 2:59 PM
The stanzas confused me a bit, but the words are beautiful. Wow.
on some deleted poem
9 Sep 2006, 3:27 PM
You're missing the point. Don't talk about the drugs. Let them inspire you.
on some deleted poem
9 Sep 2006, 2:50 PM
I like the words. A bit too easy though.
on Flour by MacFrantic
10 Sep 2006, 5:08 PM
I love it. But at the same time the punctuation pisses me off. I don't think it adds anything more than a few characters in length.
on Prayer by amanda_dcosta
15 Sep 2006, 10:29 PM
I dont particularly like God poems. But this one is good. It reads better if you get rid of "would I call on him" and "quenching" and "torrents of love and grace" IMHO
on some deleted poem
15 Sep 2006, 10:38 PM
interesting.
on Farewell, Kind Lover by Dovina
15 Sep 2006, 10:42 PM
Wow!
on The Red Chain by MacFrantic
16 Sep 2006, 2:24 PM
Did I miss something in the first line? A missing word or I just don't understand enough to accept it. Second stanza; elegant, chilling.
on Morning Glory by moyah8
15 Sep 2006, 10:35 PM
Meaningless dribble.
on weather poem part 7: a short, sudden gust by nypoet22
17 Sep 2006, 12:15 PM
I think you mean "whether" in the last line.
on some deleted poem
19 Sep 2006, 9:32 PM
Holy shit!
on some deleted poem
20 Sep 2006, 8:46 PM
Not much there.
on I Have, Because I Am by flock
20 Sep 2006, 8:55 PM
I kind of liked the first few stanzas, but it just got worse as it went on, and then worse again until the final cliche ruined it entirely.
on Farmhouse, Southern France (storm on arrival) by Ranger
22 Sep 2006, 8:32 PM
I like some of the imagery..."solar flowers" "a million beating fists" "screaming slaves in chain gang rows", but they just don't string together that well for me.
on fear by BrendanElder
29 Sep 2006, 12:04 AM
I can feel it coming from you heart. Beautiful.
on some deleted poem
30 Sep 2006, 8:18 PM
I'm taking notes. Beautiful.
on the secret life of the sundew by pollywolly
30 Sep 2006, 8:29 PM
Nice imagery.