on I Can Write A Wrong, But I Can't Right A Poem by horus8
18 Dec 2002, 2:55 PM
Guys you make me sad when you fight so.
replying on Mum why are grandmas arms so baggy? by ==Doylum
18 Dec 2002, 1:57 PM
Doesn't exploit the inherent qualities of haiku very well. Not concrete enough. They say/With age comes wisdom,/retirement,/bingo - /then wings to fly there. Why not break it up. No need for a rigid, meaningless structure that has nothing to do with the poem. Normally I'd let it go but it seems so pained.s
on Mum why are grandmas arms so baggy? by ==Doylum
16 Dec 2002, 11:15 AM
meow. 0.
on My Friend? by Blade
16 Dec 2002, 9:31 AM
good oneN
on My Friend? by Blade
16 Dec 2002, 9:31 AM
good oneN
on Dear Mr. Poetry, could you hold my purse? <how does babbit do it> by horus8
9 Dec 2002, 4:58 PM
1, these are haiku plural 2, i wrote a poem about you and i'd be honored if you read it which is to say i won't stop bothering you until you do because i love you and i want to have tons of babies with you and nobody but you and live with you etcetcetcwergfcerfderdfefd the damn thing scratched me as i was installinig a cat door
on Excommunication by inch of candle - Jesus wants me for a bum ream. An narrative in so many verses that madam palms readings have been savarlay curtailed by ==Doylum
8 Dec 2002, 9:01 PM
tofu and chew. good work. SHE WON'T GO SHE WON'T GO SHE WON'T GO SHE WON'T GO SHE WON'T GO SHE WON'T GO SHE WON'T GO
on A BACHUS MAN A MANY by Garrett S Sexton
8 Dec 2002, 8:17 PM
This is quite good.
replying on My ode to "the artist" by Agemo-Z
8 Dec 2002, 7:50 PM
If you were articulate you'd be terrifying.
replying on The Yule tide log by ==Doylum
8 Dec 2002, 7:06 PM
I actually quoted that same song in a comment once.
for fuck's sake (yes that's an apostrophe, whatcha fucking gonna do?) Dave Grohl is not in the QOTSA. He is merely a friend of the band, a hanger on. He wanted to play on the album before this one and he was rejected. He got to play on this one because he's pretty much the best out there as far as talent and fame are concerned, and because he wanted to.
horus: the new qotsa song is "No One Knows". The older one I refered to is "feel good hit of the summer". You can get both on Gnutella (use Shareaza). But I encourage you to buy their music as they deserve your money more than most people.
horus: the new qotsa song is "No One Knows". The older one I refered to is "feel good hit of the summer". You can get both on Gnutella (use Shareaza). But I encourage you to buy their music as they deserve your money more than most people.
on The North Wind by Ranger
25 Nov 2002, 6:49 AM
BLADE'S STUPID
on the devil in you by ciantu
24 Nov 2002, 8:50 PM
GOOD WORK KEEP WORKING WORKER
replying on suicide lost the plot by T'ien
24 Nov 2002, 8:48 PM
I FOR ONE THINK YOU ARE FUNNY.
replying on Orange Hills (Villanelle) by Moss
24 Nov 2002, 8:25 PM
TEACHER TEACHER GIMME THE NEWS I GOTTA BAD CASE OF LOVING YOU. AND I'M GAY.