on Essential Love by unknown
3 Jan 2003, 5:43 PM
What's with girls and poetry. Jesus christ I never saw Ezra Pound cover this material.p
on Come Back to Me by jlanza
3 Jan 2003, 5:41 PM
why not...write a poem about it?
on Thank You Mom by savannah
3 Jan 2003, 5:40 PM
Is your mom as handsome as me? I think not.I
on Dream Walker by Tekara
3 Jan 2003, 5:37 PM
You still feel 1onely don't you. Get it?? 1. Just kidding, 0.
on I Dig a Ponytail by Doris & Oats by w~* ATHENA *~w
3 Jan 2003, 5:36 PM
Plaid Skirts are so fucking tired. Zero.d
on I Love You!! by Babieflirt
3 Jan 2003, 5:35 PM
Dark Angel's new persona is amazing, good work.r
on Bein' Vegan by poetandknowit
3 Jan 2003, 5:34 PM
nice to see something that isn't haiku. Care for a boku?
on Unwanted Return by PawnedTidal
3 Jan 2003, 5:31 PM
This is aweful - not awesome.r
on I Retry My Resolve by Nicholas Jones
3 Jan 2003, 5:30 PM
dogs -> dongs, and give it more of a punch at the end. Trust me I'm an expert.??
on Waking Up by PawnedTidal
3 Jan 2003, 5:29 PM
NO
on None by poemreader
3 Jan 2003, 5:26 PM
Which ways would that be?? By the way it's obviously your fault.
on The spleenless poet by Bachus
30 Dec 2002, 4:23 PM
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on The Coming Light by poetandknowit
23 Dec 2002, 9:23 PM
"I'm speechless. I'm sorry, and I have no wish whatsoever to spark a
race war, but as a Brit this typifies what I hate about Yanks. Where is
your style? This is an absolute horror of a piece. 0, and for the first
time ever if I could give minus points I would. The worst piece of shit
I've ever read on this site. I can't believe a poem has been posted
going through the moon for inspiration. Not only that, but your
verses are completely and utterly uninspiring. The final line beggars
belief, and your use of the moon throughout and the various references to
the moon suggest that you are a child pretending to be an adult.
Awful. "l
race war, but as a Brit this typifies what I hate about Yanks. Where is
your style? This is an absolute horror of a piece. 0, and for the first
time ever if I could give minus points I would. The worst piece of shit
I've ever read on this site. I can't believe a poem has been posted
going through the moon for inspiration. Not only that, but your
verses are completely and utterly uninspiring. The final line beggars
belief, and your use of the moon throughout and the various references to
the moon suggest that you are a child pretending to be an adult.
Awful. "l
replying on Dirty bomb, code name: PLUTONIUM by horus8
23 Dec 2002, 9:11 PM
Why is it a shame that I enjoyed a poem?? Seriously, it's very good. Very forceful - you can't help but feel that every word really means something.e
replying on Skin, Bone, Flesh & Blood by scitz
23 Dec 2002, 8:16 PM
ON A SECOND READING, I REALIZE I AM WRONG.A
replying on Skin, Bone, Flesh & Blood by scitz
23 Dec 2002, 8:16 PM
YOU FORGOT TO MENTION THE WOEFULLY INADEQUATE INCLUSION OF A COCKSUCKING THEMEr
on Dirty bomb, code name: PLUTONIUM by horus8
23 Dec 2002, 5:34 PM
This is the best poem you've done - at least I enjoyed it more than any other you've done. By paring it down but avoiding minimalism you really more solidly strike the nerve that you fumble with in your more sprawling work. By the way, you might find my latest poem amusing.