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20 most recent comments by INTRANSIT (1401-1420)

regarding some deleted poem... 15-Dec-02/1:13 PM
the door doth swing.....
Re: joyriding by Bill Z Bub 19-Dec-02/7:04 PM
Hot for teacher? Definitely a thinker.
Re: March by <~> 19-Dec-02/4:49 PM
Beauty, as usual.
Re: Dirty bomb, code name: PLUTONIUM by horus8 24-Dec-02/9:25 AM
Again, at my own peril, I liked it.
I think people are jealous of you because you are comfortable in your insanity. Self comfort is something to be admired. if it exists.
Re: The Coming Light by poetandknowit 23-Dec-02/2:38 PM
I feel something secondary going on here. Can't find it yet. I'll come back.
Re: Here There Be Dragons by blkarakagain 23-Dec-02/2:05 PM
7 for the effort. tear it down, weld and machine the crank,magnaflux the rods, new slugs,jugs and plugs. bearings. It'll run good.
Re: strange beds (1983) by Bill Z Bub 23-Dec-02/2:11 PM
S-3 cornfuses me a bit. I am getting young lust from it though.
regarding some deleted poem... 23-Dec-02/2:19 PM
"Thats life," and down. Takes a nasty spin. too nasty for my tastes. Otherwise, keep steppin'.
regarding some deleted poem... 22-Dec-02/3:28 PM
Um, really, REALLY good. You could teach me about how to find a beat. I dont want to spoil this for others so I'll just score
Re: missing time by Bill Z Bub 22-Dec-02/3:34 PM
The "madness" stanza trips some how between wall and door? Close to perfection ,I'd say.
regarding some deleted poem... 20-Dec-02/12:33 PM
Actually it does,G. I try to write whole things as they come to mind,then think and return. Or ask someones opinion. Poetandknowit is right about tinking things through.I haven't written anything new in a while(haulin ass)(and cars too)But this I think is a better way to go about things. Scribble like mad. Then discriminate. I sense 2 possibilities in your scratch. I'm doing req. Anything that you might remember from my archives I will repost before xmas. Pick.
regarding some deleted poem... 20-Dec-02/12:41 PM
I'm with G. Alittle tweaking this could be perfect. You're a bad man with a keyboard! Cat walk of ego. Dooooood.
Re: At the circle K by <{Baba^Yaga}> 20-Dec-02/12:48 PM
I still know nothing of music but what I hear. Self plug,last comment? I'll try to get to L.A. Next year. Home comp. on fritz. I'll need thos addresses later,again.
regarding some deleted poem... 19-Dec-02/4:46 PM
If men could be flowers, I'd be a tall red Canna. Fab read dear. Thank you. If it weren't for goils, who knows what us guys would do with all that time>:>
regarding some deleted poem... 19-Dec-02/4:58 PM
I think this is my favorite of yours. Toast! I stink! Shower time!
YAY!
Re: A christmas thought by keatsImnot 18-Dec-02/6:10 PM
Nice twist of the knife there!
Re: Thought by Quarton 24-Dec-02/9:04 AM
Most excellent,sir.
Re: fa11ing by Bill Z Bub 18-Dec-02/5:12 PM
This kicks ass.
regarding some deleted poem... 20-Dec-02/12:41 PM
I'm with G. Alittle tweaking this could be perfect. You're a bad man with a keyboard! Cat walk of ego. Dooooood.
Re: downtown bus by Bill Z Bub 20-Dec-02/5:17 PM
Hey! Down in front! damn people.


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