on some deleted poem
15 Dec 2002, 1:13 PM
the door doth swing.....
on joyriding by Bill Z Bub
19 Dec 2002, 7:04 PM
Hot for teacher? Definitely a thinker.
on Dirty bomb, code name: PLUTONIUM by horus8
24 Dec 2002, 9:25 AM
Again, at my own peril, I liked it.
I think people are jealous of you because you are comfortable in your insanity. Self comfort is something to be admired. if it exists.
I think people are jealous of you because you are comfortable in your insanity. Self comfort is something to be admired. if it exists.
on The Coming Light by poetandknowit
23 Dec 2002, 2:38 PM
I feel something secondary going on here. Can't find it yet. I'll come back.
on Here There Be Dragons by blkarakagain
23 Dec 2002, 2:05 PM
7 for the effort. tear it down, weld and machine the crank,magnaflux the rods, new slugs,jugs and plugs. bearings. It'll run good.
on strange beds (1983) by Bill Z Bub
23 Dec 2002, 2:11 PM
S-3 cornfuses me a bit. I am getting young lust from it though.
on some deleted poem
23 Dec 2002, 2:19 PM
"Thats life," and down. Takes a nasty spin. too nasty for my tastes. Otherwise, keep steppin'.
on some deleted poem
22 Dec 2002, 3:28 PM
Um, really, REALLY good. You could teach me about how to find a beat. I dont want to spoil this for others so I'll just score
on missing time by Bill Z Bub
22 Dec 2002, 3:34 PM
The "madness" stanza trips some how between wall and door? Close to perfection ,I'd say.
on some deleted poem
20 Dec 2002, 12:33 PM
Actually it does,G. I try to write whole things as they come to mind,then think and return. Or ask someones opinion. Poetandknowit is right about tinking things through.I haven't written anything new in a while(haulin ass)(and cars too)But this I think is a better way to go about things. Scribble like mad. Then discriminate. I sense 2 possibilities in your scratch. I'm doing req. Anything that you might remember from my archives I will repost before xmas. Pick.
on some deleted poem
20 Dec 2002, 12:41 PM
I'm with G. Alittle tweaking this could be perfect. You're a bad man with a keyboard! Cat walk of ego. Dooooood.
on At the circle K by <{Baba^Yaga}>
20 Dec 2002, 12:48 PM
I still know nothing of music but what I hear. Self plug,last comment? I'll try to get to L.A. Next year. Home comp. on fritz. I'll need thos addresses later,again.
on some deleted poem
19 Dec 2002, 4:46 PM
If men could be flowers, I'd be a tall red Canna. Fab read dear. Thank you. If it weren't for goils, who knows what us guys would do with all that time>:>
on some deleted poem
19 Dec 2002, 4:58 PM
I think this is my favorite of yours. Toast! I stink! Shower time!
YAY!
YAY!
on A christmas thought by keatsImnot
18 Dec 2002, 6:10 PM
Nice twist of the knife there!
on fa11ing by Bill Z Bub
18 Dec 2002, 5:12 PM
This kicks ass.
on some deleted poem
20 Dec 2002, 12:41 PM
I'm with G. Alittle tweaking this could be perfect. You're a bad man with a keyboard! Cat walk of ego. Dooooood.
on downtown bus by Bill Z Bub
20 Dec 2002, 5:17 PM
Hey! Down in front! damn people.