Comments byINTRANSIT, 801–820 back, including replies. Only comments on poems

on Gothic by zodiac 4 May 2004, 7:11 AM
I disagree. There is a poem in there. What you need is a well trained Ferret. As you know, I am not said Ferret. Put it back in the english wheel.
on The Influence of Anxiety by Nicholas Jones 4 May 2004, 6:52 AM
I'll get back to you. In a hunnert or so years.




Poem or not, it is a vehicle to get from your last writ to your next. Most important.
Bloomsday? Hmmmm..
on Natural Remedy by richa 3 May 2004, 5:47 PM
"grow tall and tall..." maybe. It's a Whitman thing. I dunno. I like it as is. I tend to overlook burned leaves if the root is strong.
on Loss by <{Baba^Yaga}> 2 May 2004, 5:35 PM
You swim so fluidly through the murky waters of your past. My past, not so murky, not clear either.
on the beale street mud festival. by wilco 2 May 2004, 5:29 PM
(Journey) Ha! What beautiful irony.
on It's True by jessicazee 1 May 2004, 7:55 AM
On a humorical note, it's funny. The earnestness however, suggests a health issue. I'm confused.
on Air by Bachus 30 Apr 2004, 4:20 PM
As always.
on The Politics of Poetry.coms by <{Baba^Yaga}> 16 Mar 2004, 3:46 PM
Sadly, my epiphanys come in single penny doses. My most recent,-as long as you follow, he will lead you anywhere he damn well pleases,- came as a two-center.

You have been blessed. Enjoy.
on Brethren by richa 16 Mar 2004, 5:12 AM
Why it is that good stuff like this gets overlooked, I'll nevr know.
on Allpoetry.com is to poetry what Asshats are to poetry by Shardik 16 Mar 2004, 5:05 AM
yes, yes. Give 'em a good Knawk Knawk.
on My Day Off by wilco 16 Mar 2004, 4:47 AM
Simple theme, simple rhyme. I like it, anyway
on My Boyfriend's Afro Pick by horus8 14 Mar 2004, 3:10 PM
Just how much Ginsberg have you read?
on Lullaby by Goad 14 Mar 2004, 2:25 PM
as the last to comment, I missed the tweaks and read at least three times before I had anything to say. obviously, I still don't. filling in the blank -9-.
on Blinking by zodiac 14 Mar 2004, 1:59 PM
ready sounds better. I still get fearlessness.
replying on Blinking by zodiac 14 Mar 2004, 1:21 PM
Remembering the fearlessness of youth. I just don't understand the shock value of the cock here. Skinny dipping maybe??? I dunno.

pots right, cards a comin'.
on Blinking by zodiac 14 Mar 2004, 1:16 PM
what is the point here?
replying on Woman in the purple cotton jacket(repaired) by INTRANSIT 13 Mar 2004, 3:16 PM
Thanks, Shuushin. I wasn't feeling very open that day. My apologies.
replying on Woman in the purple cotton jacket(repaired) by INTRANSIT 13 Mar 2004, 3:13 PM
Yes. I read not too long ago, that part of free verse is carrying the pace through the poem. Did I slow it correctly?
As far as the "kid gloves" are concerned, you don't need them, however, "heavy handing" doesn't work. Not that you intended that originally. I am oversensitive at times, too. One request? No rewriting in the future, please. It feels like you're doing the work FOR me. Just a bump in the right direction and a reason, and I'm good to go.

Thank you immensly, Captain Zodiac

INTRANSIT
on Eris, my blade, the accurst villanelle by SupremeDreamer 13 Mar 2004, 12:02 PM
Much better than my first attempt at a villanelle was. Funnier too. Shrill knell. too good.lol.
on Eris, my blade, the accurst villanelle by SupremeDreamer 13 Mar 2004, 11:50 AM
ok. at this point I'm more worried about your health than your poetry.